It’s hard to judge it based on a small WIP glimpse like this, but an issue I can spot is the head to the right is kind of hard to see. I would try to find a way to define it more. Maybe adding some lighter gradients along the side to create a contrast
Here’s what I saw at first, before I registered the other head
Also loved the video this is from, really great horror
It’s hard to judge it based on a small WIP glimpse like this, but an issue I can spot is the head to the right is kind of hard to see. I would try to find a way to define it more. Maybe adding some lighter gradients along the side to create a contrast

Here’s what I saw at first, before I registered the other head
Also loved the video this is from, really great horror
I really love how marcus made the wither storm an actual eldritch horror
I also love how it’s implied that the skull projectiles it shoots are the dismembered heads of its victims