Activity Mellow 2018-11-10 10:48:50 UTC I am BACK!!! 2 ag uy · 7 years, 7 months ago who are you again 2018-11-10 12:14:04 UTC 2 Ralph (Developer) · 7 years, 7 months ago I like this style you got going yo, the humor etc do more 2018-11-10 12:57:02 UTC 1 Unknown · 7 years, 7 months ago User Banned 1) uh, did they just, zip off into the atmosphere 2) dear lord that info dump 2018-11-10 13:01:10 UTC 0 Mellow · 7 years, 7 months ago Replying to: Unknown1) uh, did they just, zip off into the atmosphere 2) dear l Err, is that a bad thing? 2018-11-10 13:14:32 UTC 0 Unknown · 7 years, 6 months ago User Banned Replying to: MellowErr, is that a bad thing? Both of these, yes. 1st is confusing to the viewer as there is zero explanation as the what just happened. 2 is just lazy. Character motives, personality and the such should be shown not told. 2018-11-10 22:05:31 UTC 0 Mellow · 7 years, 6 months ago Replying to: UnknownBoth of these, yes. 1st is confusing to the viewer as there Oh crap 2018-11-10 22:09:34 UTC 0 Mellow · 7 years, 6 months ago Replying to: UnknownBoth of these, yes. 1st is confusing to the viewer as there Should I delete this post and act like it never happened? 2018-11-10 22:11:55 UTC 0 Unknown · 7 years, 6 months ago User Banned Replying to: MellowShould I delete this post and act like it never happened? No, just learn from your mistakes 2018-11-10 22:19:41 UTC 0 Mellow · 7 years, 6 months ago Replying to: UnknownNo, just learn from your mistakes Hmm, okay. But, there’s no turning back now that I pretty much exposed the things they do and what you said. 2018-11-10 22:23:07 UTC 0 Mellow · 7 years, 6 months ago Replying to: UnknownNo, just learn from your mistakes Luckily enough, their personalities are safe and (most of) their motives are too (except from one). 2018-11-10 22:24:17 UTC 0
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who are you again
I like this style you got going yo, the humor etc
do more
User Banned
1) uh, did they just, zip off into the atmosphere
2) dear lord that info dump
Err, is that a bad thing?
User Banned
Both of these, yes.
1st is confusing to the viewer as there is zero explanation as the what just happened.
2 is just lazy. Character motives, personality and the such should be shown not told.
Oh crap
Should I delete this post and act like it never happened?
User Banned
No, just learn from your mistakes
Hmm, okay. But, there’s no turning back now that I pretty much exposed the things they do and what you said.
Luckily enough, their personalities are safe and (most of) their motives are too (except from one).