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hello, could I have a drawing of my OC Elden with his sword in an Anime Style? With Anime Pose?
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hello, could I have a drawing of my OC Elden with his sword in an Anime Style? With Anime Pose?
Okay.
Im gonna give you critism.
Scarfs are unoriginal and their lazy. Same as bandanas. Put detail, it is bad that the rest of us are putting detail into are figs and then, not trying to be rude but people like you just make Undetailed unoriginal figs. While the rest of us work for are figs. Thats all im gonna say. Be original, put detail into your figs.
Mate this character doesn’t even have a scarf lol. It’s a stickfigure. It’s not being lazy, it’s choosing a style of base for a character. It doesn’t matter what you do and how much detail you put in your figures, let him do what he wants to do. He can be plenty original in many different ways, like storyline and personality. Don’t rat on the guy and assume he’s unoriginal simply because he uses a stickfigure. Detail doesn’t equal originality.
So, could I have a fast review and general impression of my OC?
PS: He has a DRAGON Form
Well, I’d probably need more on a personality and what his storyline is, stuff like that, but I get the general vibe that he seems kind of like a “wandering” character, searching off to find something, idk I’ll need more on personality and lore lol
Effectively , he wants to find something.
His Brother.
Let me resume the story:
In the town of Sidea,a little boy named Elden. Blablabla. He was so polite and kind with others that people liked him very much. But others kids was jealous. blabla.
They used to bully him, because he was weak. One day, a kid punched him LMAO, he felt down, when he woke up, his eyes were white, and when the kid has wanted to punch him again, he blocked and caught his hand for throwing him like a vulgar cloth on a chair. He broke the chair LMAO. But when he came back to him. He was surprised and vanished, he woke up in an hospital. Blabla.
At home, he was thinking, he knew that something was wrong. Then he heard a voice saying: Did you see how I throwed him? I’m too strong. He thought that somebody was behind the door but there was nobody. He heard the same voice again saying: Where are you looking? I’m inside you. So he explained it to his dad. Blabla. The went to see a mage. The mage said that Elden,is the elected. Each millennium, The legendary dragon Nevoth chooses a human body for his reincarnation. Blablabla.
He went with the sorcerer at a secret place to train Blablabla. When he came home, his town was in ruins, he saw an inhabitant and asked him what happened. He said the village was attacked. Why? They were looking for the elected…literally Elden.
So, Elden sworn to kill them.
He knows that his parents and his brother are alive and tries to find them
Aha. It’s an interesting concept, to be sure. Reminds me a lot of both Marvel’s “Venom” and DC’s “Blue Beetle” in a way, but with a dragon spirit lol. The potential I see here is the interaction with the dragon spirit and Eldin. Maybe Eldin is on the smart side and can see problems clearly but doesn’t have as much courage as others, while the Dragon heads first into conflicts without fear but often looses himself and just throws fists instead of fighting, that way teamwork between the two is required. I recommend giving the people seeking the dragon a good reason to destroy Nevoth, that way Eldin can become conflicted by his choices. Perhaps Nevoth seeks destruction, and Eldin tries to limit Nevoth’s control in order to protect others. The two would constantly have to make deals, Nevoth letting Eldin search for his family and Eldin occasionally letting Nevoth loose. I like it man! Just make sure to expand on Nevoth’s motivations and the motivations of the people looking for him. Just expand on the story a little more, add a backstory and personality for Nevoth, and you’ve got something really good here!
A character I reccomend looking at is “Kayn” from League of Legends. His scythe is alive, and he’s got some cool interactions with it, which certainly could be some inspirations you could see. Here’s a link: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=3Ny4piDu4W0
I’m feeling some Naruto Nine tails vibes
And you know how I feel about Naruto
No?
I f#%kin’ love it.
Naruto was the first anime I watched
Favorite Anime I watched
I don’t watch much anime despite my rather weeb-ish tendencies sometimes.
OOF. I was scared for an instant
OK, but is there a possibility that Nevoth isn’t Evil, but love destruction and Elden is doing his best to control him but in a “friendly”
way
Like he don’t trust humans because they hurt him or something like that and he want to destroy them.
So, Elden is trying to reason him
Of course! It’s your story, you can do whatever you want with it lol, I’m just offering my own perspective. Nevoth could just like destroying things, and the humans against him simply can’t understand that and fight against him. This causes Nevoth to not trust humans because they see destruction differently. This could really be something cool!
Yeah, and that gives me the conclusion of the story: At the End, Elden saves Nevoth (idk how) and Nevoth Realises that Humans aren’t what he thought that they were lol
If only Jackfly existed anymore
Why
He only goes on Stick Nodes every 3-5 days
And even then it’s usually only for like, an hour.
I don’t even think he takes submissions anymore.
I don’t want him to draw him.
I want that STICK draw him.
IF ONLY HE WAS ACTIVE
IN REALITY HE’S LESS ACTIVE THAN JACKFLY
Really the most active person in da group in Chimdi, and I dont know if he’s doing submissions rn
is*
Sad
id put a little more detail so the limbs dont merge entirely but thats my advice
What about his sword?
as a sword guy myself to another i wouldnt go for the plain design but somthing like this
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Too detailed for me
fair enough
I’m just good at sword.
But when it is detailed it is an other problem
this isnt detailed really
you could just copy the shape and go from there
I’ll try
Did anyone else think the wind cutter was supposed to be a fart joke at first?
Wdym?
Y’know, cutting the wind? Crop dusting? That sorta thing
Mate, It is just a sword name
Yeah and also it’s unlucky to have the name dick
One time again,WDYM
Ugh, nvm. You must not understand
Apparently…
Anyways, good job
Thanks