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    Gray Dank 2019-08-20 20:00:11 UTC

    So I Just uploaded a new Animation on my YouTube.
    Just thought I should advertise it here.

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    • It’s quite good but it honestly would be much better with less camera wobble. Also some movements are kinda rough as it’s often start and stop and some character’s don’t even move at all Like 0:50 -1:00

      Then there’s also a scene where he gets hit, then he is standing while being beaten up, then suddenly one guy is missing and the character is kneeling.
      The sudden and confusing jumps offput me, but otherwise great work!

      2019-08-20 20:12:50 UTC 2
    • this was actually pretty good, the animation itself was a bit stop and go and stop and go aka not terribly fluid, but it was a quick little story/beat-em-up and it did the job

      so yeah, work on fluidity a bit, going from one move into the next/next opponent etc, and yeah, definitely tone down the wobble – it’s meant to be subtle, very subtle

      overally you have a lot of potential though, 100%

      2019-08-21 00:14:10 UTC 1