i’d have made the floor/camera go more down/up during the shake rather than more of the rough quick shake you did here

not that it’s wrong or anything but, might’ve been a bit more oomph with that

also pause just a millisecond longer before leaping when he’s fully crouched

and always have the contact frame with jumps or punches
you need the frame where he’s fully extended, jumping, but feet (or 1 foot) is still on the ground

here you went from crouch -> he’s halfway off the screen

oof at so much feedback