Not to be an asshole… wait, actually yes to be an asshole I really do not like the character designs and the dad looks like it was made by a different person
nah not cringey its a typical “first-ish” type of animation
you got ambition, with a story and characters and all the scenes
now you gotta think about focusing on making it entertaining for the viewers:
– sound/music/ambiance bigly needed
– too much text, was just a book in video form
– barely any animation, was more like a powerpoint slideshow
all that stuff means more work, but that’s how animation be, time and patience
Not to be an asshole… wait, actually yes to be an asshole I really do not like the character designs and the dad looks like it was made by a different person
it was made by a different person
Better than my animatons, unless it would just be a jump that looks like he started floating
nah not cringey its a typical “first-ish” type of animation
you got ambition, with a story and characters and all the scenes
now you gotta think about focusing on making it entertaining for the viewers:
– sound/music/ambiance bigly needed
– too much text, was just a book in video form
– barely any animation, was more like a powerpoint slideshow
all that stuff means more work, but that’s how animation be, time and patience