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    Kranossubscriberoccifer 2020-10-30 12:31:16 UTC

    Weird anime plot I made last year but then forgot about it.

    Basically it’s a anime girl that works in the military. Oh, and she’s secretly a vampire. She and her team go to this island where they are supposed to guard something but they don’t know what. Days later, some researchers found what seem to be perfectly preserved dinosaur corpses. But some of them seem mutated. Suddenly, some of the dinosaur corpses wake up and then bam! Zombie dinosaurs! (And some zombie prehestoric mammals) now Mia (the vampire military girl) has to fight for her survival. Will she survive? Or will she become extinct?

    Coming…. never…
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    Or is it?

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    • 😐

      2020-10-30 12:36:04 UTC 6
    • THIS SHIz is wow make a series on this

      2020-10-30 12:40:32 UTC 0
    • im gonna fail NNN

      2020-10-30 12:52:14 UTC 2
    • You know, I was gonna say this is kinda weird plot and makes no sense nor was it planned over before hand but like..That really do be how some anime plots be like so go for it I guess.. Jokes aside, if your actually considering making this into a series or something, a lot a plot holes are

      1#: “Oh, she’s also a vampire” What how when and why???? Just some random person is a vampire for no reason?? is their any reason for her to be vampire that actually adds to the story??? And if you do have a reason, you need to incorporate HOW she became one or like.. why she became one?? and does that mean theres more vampires?? do they play a part in the story??

      2#: Why would you send a team of military “defend something” but they don’t know what they’re defending, that cause some tension?? maybe some sort of argument between the characters (if you actually choose to keep this/utilize it). If not, at least take the time to give them a reason for being there

      3#: How did the dinosaurs come to life? some random magic??? something you already know and won’t tell until later on?? if so than I hope you have it planned because it can’t just be told some random time later or else its gonna boring, it should be a gradually a surprise that moves on slowly to figuring out what happened to make them undead. AND HOW ARE THE DINOSAUR CORPSES PERFECTLY PRESERVED??? were they running tests on it?? maybe secret CIA shit?? and if so why would the military send them to that island???

      2020-10-30 12:53:42 UTC 4
      • Replying to: SmileGuyYou know, I was gonna say this is kinda weird plot and makes

        kranos you shoukd make explanations

        2020-10-30 12:57:31 UTC 3
      • Replying to: SmileGuyYou know, I was gonna say this is kinda weird plot and makes

        To be honest I was bored while thinking about this anime plot thing. But now that I think about you’re right. There are alot of plot holes…. too many plot holes….
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        Holy shit there are alot of plot holes… how high was I when I was writing about this anime plot?

        2020-10-30 12:58:41 UTC 2
    • thicc

      not the anime girl tho

      2020-10-30 13:14:54 UTC 2
      • Replying to: vuicethicc not the anime girl tho

        Ikr. That zombie moose is EXTRA THICC

        2020-10-30 13:17:43 UTC 2
        • Replying to: KranosIkr. That zombie moose is EXTRA THICC

          Lol Kranos your pretty cooool

          2020-10-30 13:41:42 UTC 0
    • Holy fucking shit, did you make all those your self?

      2020-10-30 16:33:33 UTC 1
    • One of them is a fucking Moose

      2020-10-30 16:34:32 UTC 0
    • *cums*

      2020-10-30 18:11:03 UTC 0