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    KabirIsMe 2020-11-20 16:47:53 UTC

    new jojo animation plz rate it for me its my second animation with almost no expirience

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    • don’t spam, this is a warning

      2020-11-20 16:48:42 UTC 3
      • Replying to: [Abandoned]don't spam, this is a warning

        wut u mean spam i just want feed back plz respond

        2020-11-20 18:50:12 UTC 0
    • Could be worse.

      Just keep practicing and using Stick Nodes so you know how to utilise the tools provided.

      2020-11-20 16:52:12 UTC 2
      • Replying to: Tastylemon16Could be worse. Just keep practicing and using Stick Nodes

        k thx for the feed back and i am still learning

        2020-11-20 18:48:53 UTC 0
    • 1) definitely need a floor

      2) even though he floats, you shouldn’t just slide SP across with absolutely no limb movement at all, it looks like a statue sliding across the ground – lean forward / show him “pushing” his weight through the air

      3) don’t just go from pose to pose (when he grabs the dude, frame1: hes standing there, frame2: he has him grabbed – what happened in between?)

      4) the rapid punches, by their nature of being so fast, need an effect to look right, this is called “smearing” in animation terms, there are effects for it on the website actually: http://sticknodes.com/stickfigures/?wpfb_s=jojo+punch&search_field=all&time=all but they can be tricky to animate correctly – it takes practice

      smearing: effects drawn as to show rapid movement that when viewed in animation are unnoticeable and look natural, but on a paused frame, well:

      2020-11-20 17:01:25 UTC 2
      • Replying to: Ralph (Developer)1) definitely need a floor 2) even though he floats, you sh

        so yea i just learnd effects before ths animationi do understand no flot i will try to be better thanks for typing soo much again no complaint i will get better just found out about the app 3 days ago
        u are a pro i geuss

        2020-11-20 18:47:19 UTC 0