first off why the hell am i always in these types of animations lmao

second the premise and scene setups and animation all good

lil too slow with the text
I can read it like 3 times before it moves on, which isn’t good in things like this, ain’t don’t nobody read and ain’t don’t nobody wanna read and then look at a non-moving picture for 3 extra seconds
– speaking of, should add more movement during text, even if it’s just gestures or something, the camera wobble isn’t enough “dynamic” movement to suffice

detailed or dedicated

either way i can see u speak truth