The way scorpion moves his tail, but the rest of his body is still is a tad wonky, and it doesn’t really look like a threat it sorta looks like he poked him
Maybe to have it be that way, sorta have him get up close to him with the tail right below his chin, instead of him like flopping it next to him
and also have the camera close up on him, not giving much breathing room as that signals he’s being threatened and doesn’t have the platform to really combat it

The text is placed in a weird spot, I think it might look better if it was near the characters heads

The Egypt text is fine where it is though

When doing talking scenes, try having the characters do little movements
It really helps out imo

Some of the things I do like are the figures, and backgrounds and such

The animation can use work

Otherwise it’s decent
6.5/10
I think with practice you can get good at this, you’re already pretty decent

This isn’t meant to be rude, I’m just tryna help you improve