• …Is this dead?

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  • I still haven’t finished this lol

    *Main Information:*
    Real Name- Zordon Fredrick Gallows
    Age- 34
    Race- Human
    Gender- Male
    Date of Birth- September 23, 1331
    Home Country- Great Britain
    RCOA Class- Etherian

    *Powers:*
    Zordon’s unique Aether energy crystal when used lets him transform into one of his his Aether Forms, all of them give him regenerative capabilities, increased strength, endurance, speed, mastery of certain skills, and the ability to manipulate and absorb electricity.

    Though if he choses to, Zordon can instead transform the crystal into a weapon, so that the crystal would last longer. He can also control magnetism with his electricity when transformed, allowing him to use a lamp post as a baseball bat.

    *Equipment:*
    1. Potion Satchel- A bag that holds many different types of potions that Zordon made, he uses these when he isn’t using his energy crystal. They each have unique properties that will give Zordon different benefits like invisibility, speed, and etc, though these effects are temporary and drinking them could have dangerous side effects.

    2. Essence Gauntlet- A gauntlet that holds the essence of some long dead people from the Medieval Ages, which Zordon uses to make astral copies. It uses energy from the Aether crystal to power itself, Zordon got this gauntlet from the Ruins of Camelot.

    3. Aether Crystal- A magical crystal that allows him to transform into one of his many Aether forms, though it can instead transform itself into one of the many Aether Arts.

    4. Cursed Ring of Etkyr Fredu- A ring

    *Unique Traits:*

    1. /New Helper/ – Zordon uses the essence of some of the long dead inhabitants of the Medieval Ages, to make an astral copy of them. They may help him in battle, like the Companion’s Sword.

    > Or help him with transportation like the Steed Hide. But he still needs at least one thing they held most dearly or one of their body parts to be able to summon them. Summoning them though shortens the Aether crystal’s time limit, how much time is shortened is fully dependent on what Zordon

    * summons:

    Keeper Robes- When the robe’s essence is summoned, a long dead Keeper Matron will appear. He can’t help in combat, but he will give all the answers to

    * your questions about magic and the Medieval Ages. (Costs 21 minutes)

    Mercenary’s Sword- When the sword’s essence is summoned, a long dead mercenary will appear. The only thing she does is help in combat using her

    * sword and shield. (Costs 40 minutes)

    Steed’s Saddle- When the saddle’s essence is summoned, a long dead armored war horse will appear. The only thing he does is transport the

    * summoner to faraway lands in a timely manner. (Costs 24 minutes)

    * Scoundrel’s Shiv- When the shiv’s essence is summoned, a long dead thief will

    appear. He scouts for enemies and allows the summoner to learn the layout of the area. (Costs 23 minutes)

    2. /Aether Arts/- The Aether Arts are weapons and armor Zordon can use instead of transforming to more efficiently conserve the energy of the Aether crystal.

    * These weapons can range from swords to bows:

    Lightning‘s Edge- A greatsword

    Hunter’s Strife- A bow that uses infinite arrows

    Guardian’s Strike- A sword and shield

    * These armor can range from boots to helmets:

    Falcon Boots-

    *Apparel/Forms:*
    1. Normal Form-

    2. Knight Aether Form-

    3. Wizard Aether Form-

    *Origins:*
    Zordon was an apprentice of Merlin and an accidental time traveler from the Medieval Ages due to doing the Custos Aspectu spell, one of the forbidden spells of the Nine. He was secretly trying to do this spell until he succeeded.

    The lasting energy of the spell awakened the first Scaleridians, who attacked Camelot and killed many people. He landed in the present day with his Electronymph crystal and has lived there ever since.

    *Feats:*
    * He is one of the few people who has casted one of the nine (very hard to do) spells of the Aurarus.

    * His electricity can have the same effect as an electric chair on people if he chooses to.

    * He has defended the old ruins of Camelot agaisnt an awakening, unweakened and unrelenting horde of Scaleridians with his Aether Form for 30 minutes until backup arrived.

    * With his full power, he can lift a ship with his magnetism for a few minutes.

    *Weaknesses:*
    1. His energy crystal can only be used for 12 hours until it needs to be recharged.

    2. His defense spells and Electronymph form are weak to the Excalibur.

    3. He is still a mortal and can be killed even in his Aether form.

    4. A strong enough spell or physical attack to the crystal in his chest within the right angle can seperate Zordon from his energy crystal involuntarily.

    5. Zordon can be distracted and manipulated through the use of his guilt towards the Fall of Camelot.

    6. Zordon’s potions can drastically backfire on him if he drinks too much of it.

    7. His electricity can be deflected by a strong enough insulating material. Or even absorbed with enough power.

    8. He doesn’t have much k…[Read more]

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  • Dragon Ball Void Warriors

    Prologue – Raw Power

    -–—《¤》—–-

    [Duria Palace, Planet Furuta – Age 770]

    King Durian sat at his throne. The throne room itself had a window overlooking Duria City, with a variety of stands and shops set up amidst clusters of houses. Furutans bustled about; Durian noticed that there was a lot more traffic than normal, but he didn’t know why.
    Growing concerned, he stood up and started for the stairs that led down to the palace’s entrance. As soon as he had taken a few steps, however, a Furutan named Namgo turned the corner in a slight panic.
    “King Durian, sir, there’s an issue downstairs,” he said.
    “What’s wrong?” Durian asked, Namgo leading him to the basement steps.
    “Well, I’m sure you heard of the twins. Eeto and Epla, born to Grafu and Pecha last week.”
    “Yes…?” he said questioningly, the two entering the bottom floor of the palace.
    “Well, they were about to put them into their Incubation Chambers, but… well, you have to see it to believe it. Everybody went crazy when they sensed their energy.” Namgo brought Durian over to the older boy, Eeto.
    “A five, already?!’ Durian half-shouted.
    “Yeah. Epla’s already at a three,” Namgo added. Durian just glared at him, and then focused hard on Eeto.
    “Inconceivable. He just went up by one while I was reading him… well, I suppose that gets rid of all of my doubts.”
    “So, what do you make of it?”
    “I have no idea.”
    “Exactly. Neither do I. If they’re already this strong, what kind of monstrous power will they have when they’re older?”
    “…I have no idea,” Durian repeated hesitantly.
    “Well, I guess we should just hope for the best,” Namgo replied.
    “Yes, we should.” Durian and Namgo headed back upstairs to the throne room.
    “Okay, seriously though, how should we go about this? They’re stronger than most other children even though they’re not even a month old. They shouldn’t even be getting close to a two yet,” Namgo said. The two sat for a while, pondering the boys’ strength.
    “The eclipse.” Durian sat straight up in his throne.
    “What?” Namgo asked.
    “The eclipse. The twins were the only two Furutans born during the time the eclipse lasted, it must have had- had some sort of effect on them.”
    “This is sounding dangerously like those Sai-” Namgo started.
    “Stop there. Do not speak of them. We as a race agreed as soon as we were banished from that planet, Vegeta, to never speak of them again.”
    “Y-yes sir, but do you think, maybe… this could be the same as that?”
    “…Possibly,” Durian said after a few seconds, calming down. “If not, just similar. Our tails don’t have that reaction to the moon anymore, after all. For now, don’t worry about what the future holds. We’ll burn that bridge when we get to it.”
    “That sounds like our best bet here. I just… I don’t know how I’m going to handle training them.”
    “I’m sure you’ll do fine, no matter how strong the boys get. You’re the best mentor there is!” Durian gave Namgo a pat on the shoulder.
    “Yeah… you’re right.”

    –》¤《–

    [Duria City, Planet Furuta – Age 782]

    “Eeto, wake up!” Epla tried to shake his brother awake.
    “I’m uuuup…” Eeto stretched and rolled right off his bed, landing on the floor with a thud.
    “Come on, bro, I know you’re not that tired. Besides, today’s our first day of training.”
    “HOLY CRUD!” Eeto practically did a backwards roll to get up. “When’s Namgo coming?”
    “In about three hours. He said we should train as hard as we can at home until then.”
    “Okay, so, like… just keep farming and stuff? Our usual workload?”
    “Pretty much, yeah. I don’t see how else we could train…”
    “Hop on my back.”
    “What?!” Epla exclaimed.
    “Just hop on. I wanna test how much I can lift. If I can lift you almost no problem, then I know I can lift at least a little under my own body weight. It’ll give me sort of a starting point to tell Namgo.”
    Epla snapped his fingers. “Ooooh! Alright, careful here… aaaand- hyup!”
    “Grrrgh!… Okay, yeah, you’re pretty heavy…! Down, down-down-down!”
    “Does that give you a good enough starting point?” Epla asked, holding his stomach.
    “Uh, yeah. Thanks and sorry…”
    “You’re good. I get why you needed that. Let’s get training, I guess. We’ve got some carrots to clean up today.”
    “Right.” The boys headed downstairs, grabbing their tools. Eeto grabbed a large bowl for the carrots. They went around to the back of their house where their garden was located. “Where are mom and dad?”
    “Getting us all registered and crud or whatever. Might be taking longer because of our ‘legendary power.'”
    “Oh, yeah, how many FPUs are you at now? 40-something?”
    “47 now, yeah. And according to my readings, you’re at a 51,” Epla said.
    “Dang,” Eeto replied. He plopped down and started plucking up the carrots, Epla doing the same across from him. For the majority of the three hours,…[Read more]

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  • Well…i don’t particularly write things down in my spare time but i come up with so many things locked up in my autistic creative mind of mine that i could immediately start pumping out on paper or sticknodes but the only problem is….i’m way too lazy…i mean its essentially this meme here:

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    • I didn’t read it all but the way it is going sounds great.

      Each sentence is well constructed and the scene is set nicely. I don’t know whether you have explained further on in the story about each character and the areas they visit or will, but if you just plan to keep it as a follow up from Dragon ball or linking into the universe, than even if you should ideally know the previous characters, you should give some explanation to them. That way even if the person doesn’t know much about Dragon Ball they will still know some information.

      If you have done this than nevermind I thought i’d just point that out.

      2020-07-25 22:22:24 UTC 1
  • Guess people are finally using this.
    TRT Q&A, anybody?

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  • oooo, just learned of this thing\’s existence
    I write pretty often so if this group doesn\’t die I\’ll be here sometimes I suppose

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  • So, I had a weird idea for a book.

    Primal humans, but they’re half animal (or at the very least, a Batman situation (a suit that mimics traits of an animal)). I already came up with a name and costume design for one if I do just up and pull a Batman, which, after thinking about it, I think I probably will.

    Might have some horror-ish elements in there too, if I make the design match the story.

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    • Caveman furries

      2020-07-24 22:33:05 UTC 4
    • Oh, and they’ll also have some wonky primal language thing.

      They’ll say their names in English, though, like Bowser in Odyssey.

      2020-07-24 22:34:00 UTC 1
    • dont tell me there’s a bat-human hybrid thats sick.

      2020-07-25 13:38:29 UTC 0
    • Could work, it depends which direction you will take the story. Some people think that if you use certain words or put a character in a spooky place it’s a horror story, yet if you want a truly good story that directly follows its genre than i’d advise including everything you can to follow that, this would include dark environments, uncomfortable situations, traumatic experiences.

      I’m sure you’ll do fine though you seem to be a good writer. Good luck Flashlock.

      2020-07-25 22:26:00 UTC 1