This is no means , what I’m about to say next , a insult to you , but rather my view on this
It feels way to lazy to base the character on the existence of other famous characters, especially ones that don’t really match
A mix up between 4 franchises I believe to make 1 character is rather lazy , as being friends with Mario , Sonic , Goku , etc , makes you loose out on the opportunity to make this character have original friends , there’s no mention of anybody else that isn’t a established character , so IMO at least it’s quite a lonely life , as the crutch-like reliance makes it seem as the character doesn’t have anything else to look forward too , no body to call a lover , a brother , a mother , a father , or even a new friend
The powers are also limiting , being based on pre existing lore from other media
Yeah , you could make him stronger then Goku , and unlock a new super sayain and what not , but it’s not a power you will call his
The design also doesn’t live up to his rather lavish life, I’m not talking about how the stick figure is bad in terms of skill but design
Even a horribly executed design is a design , but this relies on nonexistent details , all based not on what your mind created , but as how the app you made this with works
My Oc is Haft Demon Blood and Haft Saiyan Blood, Do not judge me ok.
Sounds too OP.
Try and make it sound more ‘rounded’, meaning make it more believable and to not have excessive abilities.
Thanks’ I’ll try to Update this guy more often, this guy is still in beta so his design will change and I may delete the friends thing ok.
This is no means , what I’m about to say next , a insult to you , but rather my view on this
It feels way to lazy to base the character on the existence of other famous characters, especially ones that don’t really match
A mix up between 4 franchises I believe to make 1 character is rather lazy , as being friends with Mario , Sonic , Goku , etc , makes you loose out on the opportunity to make this character have original friends , there’s no mention of anybody else that isn’t a established character , so IMO at least it’s quite a lonely life , as the crutch-like reliance makes it seem as the character doesn’t have anything else to look forward too , no body to call a lover , a brother , a mother , a father , or even a new friend
The powers are also limiting , being based on pre existing lore from other media
Yeah , you could make him stronger then Goku , and unlock a new super sayain and what not , but it’s not a power you will call his
The design also doesn’t live up to his rather lavish life, I’m not talking about how the stick figure is bad in terms of skill but design
Even a horribly executed design is a design , but this relies on nonexistent details , all based not on what your mind created , but as how the app you made this with works