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    Carpenter 2021-05-23 03:11:23 UTC

    This is the smoothest thing I have ever made this isn’t finished but as a noob this is a huge accomplishment to me so please don’t hate also any feedback on the animation so far?

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    • Nice oc

      2021-05-23 03:11:44 UTC 3
      • Replying to: FluffENice oc

        Thanks. But any feedback Or can you not find anything? Either is a win

        2021-05-23 03:14:44 UTC 1
    • Yes I would say this is smooth, but is lacking in some aspects.

      1.I’m guessing the scarf is a fabric, so for it to appear to bounce as it hits the floor doesn’t make much sense. It would be better to have it slowly hit the ground and stay still.

      2. The getting up part with the scarf also is a little wonky since it zooms over the head. Should just go straight up.

      3. The Oc. For starting out this is better then 80% of what people have. But is still basic and overdone. I would have a few suggestions as to where you want to go with it. You can keep the simple look but just overall improve the design. You can aim more realistic and give it fingers, eyes, nose, chin, etc. Or go for a more cartoony style at add a outline to the head or arms and such. I do make OCs for new users so if you have an idea once I have the time we can talk about what you would want.

      Seeing as your new and what you did, I would give this animation a solid to strong 7 for you level since I’m guessing this is within your first 10 animations. Your showing an understanding of effects as well as movement and smoothness. However it does lack in effectively conveying item movement

      2021-05-23 03:25:31 UTC 1
      • Replying to: Humble DamienYes I would say this is smooth, but is lacking in some aspec

        Wow you just wrote a whole fricking essay on my animation. Thank you for the critique I will try to fix it.

        2021-05-23 03:33:43 UTC 2
        • Replying to: CarpenterWow you just wrote a whole fricking essay on my animation. T

          I try to be useful with the advice. And again if you need help or advice on any more animations or OCs let me know

          2021-05-23 03:34:36 UTC 0
          • Replying to: Humble DamienI try to be useful with the advice. And again if you need he

            I mean I don’t want to take much time but I would appreciate help with my characters scarf with some tears on the edge and an outline but that’s it because I don’t want to waste too much time

            2021-05-23 03:50:34 UTC 0