Top ones a good concept, but to much like a combat bot and the NBC patch is sloppy. The bottom one also has a good concept and head design. But too much like a standard NBC elite.
Replying to:Explosive BulletTop ones a good concept, but to much like a combat bot and t
Ok I will tell you its Rp story so you understand hopefully work with lore on a thaltop colony once had a all out riot c-30 was a informant unit of early model but like with all robot companion story c-30 had a molfanction he turned on the team of drones he was with an helped the little girl out of the rubble his shoulder armour was busted up by a rioter armed with a firearm a short time latter the riot had destroyed half the colony c-30 got her to the ship latter that ship was raided by NBC mericanary witch brought all the survivors back to a camp a elite trooper was their it was their to hand sine up forms but raised a m9 at the drone witch had no memory after the crash he shot it down to the ground but it got back up with no reaction but the girl age of 13 write her name onto the sine up forms the elite asked around for the Pearson who had brought the drone with them the girl raised her hand that elite said how much of a danger it was c-30 then said that c-30 was no danger having saved that girl and he was wanting to sing up for the NBC the elite was shocked to hear that and littil did he know that c-30 was one of few remaining drones with a Ai core and the reason why the NBC words one his shoulder is sloppy is it’s spray painted on the girl 6 years latter would get to fight in the project landfall nick named jaze she where’s the armour of the elite trooper on witch had given her an many others the chance to fight he had taken her in as his own because his wife died to a mis fire killed her to months before she was to give birth she was killed by k-46 a drone latter to be scrapped for malfunctioning hope you liked the story so on to the rest of this drone body and left leg
Top ones a good concept, but to much like a combat bot and the NBC patch is sloppy. The bottom one also has a good concept and head design. But too much like a standard NBC elite.
Ok I will tell you its Rp story so you understand hopefully work with lore on a thaltop colony once had a all out riot c-30 was a informant unit of early model but like with all robot companion story c-30 had a molfanction he turned on the team of drones he was with an helped the little girl out of the rubble his shoulder armour was busted up by a rioter armed with a firearm a short time latter the riot had destroyed half the colony c-30 got her to the ship latter that ship was raided by NBC mericanary witch brought all the survivors back to a camp a elite trooper was their it was their to hand sine up forms but raised a m9 at the drone witch had no memory after the crash he shot it down to the ground but it got back up with no reaction but the girl age of 13 write her name onto the sine up forms the elite asked around for the Pearson who had brought the drone with them the girl raised her hand that elite said how much of a danger it was c-30 then said that c-30 was no danger having saved that girl and he was wanting to sing up for the NBC the elite was shocked to hear that and littil did he know that c-30 was one of few remaining drones with a Ai core and the reason why the NBC words one his shoulder is sloppy is it’s spray painted on the girl 6 years latter would get to fight in the project landfall nick named jaze she where’s the armour of the elite trooper on witch had given her an many others the chance to fight he had taken her in as his own because his wife died to a mis fire killed her to months before she was to give birth she was killed by k-46 a drone latter to be scrapped for malfunctioning hope you liked the story so on to the rest of this drone body and left leg
Umm. I cant read this without butchering the lore when it has not punctuation. Atleast periods. Please.