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    DorianX 2020-11-18 22:37:05 UTC

    Can somebody give me criticism constructive or not something looks off and I strive to make it better so I NEED criticism.

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    • This is the thing i have to say every time,

      we don’t really know whats about to happen, for example, when he punched, or chopped the torso in half, we didn’t know that was coming, i don’t know what the word is for it so i keep having to explain it, but add more of what i just said. Let us know those things are occuring.

      i’m sure there are more things that can be criticized, but back then i was known for liking SOMEWHAT stiff animations.

      2020-11-18 22:45:03 UTC 0
      • Replying to: ColloThis is the thing i have to say every time, we don't real

        That criticism is good, keep in mind the major jojo reference because spoiler alert in the show one character does that, but I should have explained that more. But also the explanation behind that is in the show their are powers blah blah blah and those powers hurt vampires real bad and strings can carry those powers and conduct them like electricity. Aka he wrapped the string around him and pulled it. And I can see how that was not made very clear.

        2020-11-18 22:48:03 UTC 2
    • jojo part 1 and 2 in a nutshell

      2020-11-18 23:28:32 UTC 1