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Enter500
2021-07-08 22:36:54 UTC How does this look? I want this to look as good as possible and I want all of your feedback!
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Enter500 2021-07-08 22:36:54 UTC
How does this look? I want this to look as good as possible and I want all of your feedback!
perhaps some motion blur/whoosh effects?
Looks good, i just think the cyan guy should have more expressive movement.
As well as a slight jitter from the sword as it adjusts to the place it has just been stuck in.
The blue guy didn’t even hit the black guy, he just punched the air and the black guy fell
it was intended to look as if he was hit in the legs, which flipped him.
I think you should try looking again, it appears that he hit his lower leg.
i just added motion blurs and it looks better
Yeah, but his arm goes past his leg and punches the air instead
hmm… maybe making it more 3d would help?
for as short as it is, it does what it needs to do well
good flippy spinny transition
the hit the guy took and bounce on the floor – nicely animated
better scene framing (don’t use the very-bottom of the camera) and some slight cam shake (very subtle) on the hits would make it more solid feeling
what do you mean by scene framing? Also, there’s a little shake on the hits, but I just do one frame where teh camera goes down a bit. Should I do something else?