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Okay so since I haven’t talked about this character I created called Survivor, I think the name should be different so I might need help getting a name for him, anyways here is the backstory. This character when he was younger (About 12) was in the middle travelling as a hobbie until suddenly he was kidnapped by a secret organisation. He was forced to train hand to hand combat, ranged weapons & all kinds of stuff related to weaponry & fighting. After 10 whole years the organisation stopped training him & gave him tasks to get rewards in return. These tasks revolved around doing assassinations around those who protected the innocent or kidnapping others to be forced to train just like him. His personality changed as well from the influence of the organisation & is why he doesn’t act innocent as he used to when younger. His main Weapon he uses is his a pistol. His other weapons he uses are not ordinary as he has a necklace which will make the opponents see hallucinations & will go insane but only if they look at the necklace long enough. He has a futuristic knife which when stabbing someone with it, it will way them down with energy but not hurt them. (Like slowing them down) & a flash light which can corrupt people but has an insane battery drain when used, and to make the matters worse the battery’s are not able to recharge & the flashlight can only be turned on for a second. The flashlight takes really long to load and will take him days to make a new one. His personality is mostly numb and can also be made up to the viewer. Here is the character design.

I like it… but I think you should maybe rid of the necklace as if the person went insane, wouldn’t that be an automatic win for you?
…yeah sure, here are a few nerfs. The necklace can easily be destroyed, and it needs to be directly be looked at exactly in the middle. The necklace is made of a really heavy material but is really small. Anything can most break it so survivor must be careful with the necklace because if he makes one mistake the necklace is gone, so the necklace will be barely used for battle and more for the organisation he’s with
That’s better! :3