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Humble Damien
2023-04-26 16:36:50 UTC Further progress on Flame V6.
I do have some fixes/possible changes left. The fixes will happen first, followed by possible changes.
Fixes + additions
-Fix the eye since it’s too bland and small.
-Fix the earring and make it really pop.
-FIx the ear, as in change it’s shape and size just to make it fit better overall
-Add the eyelid. Will be hard to do since the eyebrow goes over both the mask and his skin, but I will try to get something working.
-Ensure that other mouths can be added to Flame for lip syncing, or make his mouth fully moveablePossible Changes
-Change the jawline to be more straight. That will have its ups and downs, but as long as it looks visually better I’m open to it
-Update the nose ring if possible. Doesn’t fit right from how I look at it.
-If doable, add more highlights and shadows to really make Flame standout.If anyone has any critiques or suggestions not yet added/other ways to do anything listed let me know. I’m really trying to make this the best Flame I can possibly make so anything helps.
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Man I’ve seen you work on your OC for years dude and you constantly get so much better. This looks amazing so far!
Thank you a lot man, I really appreciate it. Really makes my work on Flame and the other characters feel worth it. I’m very grateful thank you.
I think the nose ring needs to be at more of a side view so closer in and maybe with the backside and front being a darker and lighter tone retrospectively.
At the moment it has more of a 4 / 5 view so a half front, half side view. When put on a fully side-view head it’s bound to look off.
Also I’m curious, are the red lines like scars or tattoo?
Sorry for my late response. I believe you’re right with the nose ring angle being wrong. When I drew it, I did a better job, but I just couldn’t translate it well to SN and didn’t want to stick on it for too long so moved on. I’ll give it another shot once I do the fixes and hope to be able to make it look better then.
Additionally, to answer the question on the red marks near his eyes, they’re scars. I originally added them just because I thought they looked cool honestly. I eventually added them to the old story. In the older version, when he gets “corrupted” he opens his eyes and sees his green skin and claws. He sees himself in a reflection and is terrified. He then goes to put his hands over his eyes and accidentally scratches them, causing the scars.
However now due to the updated story, it’s going to be hard to add it in. The new story now has him get corrupted while in a fight, with heat being how the fight ends. Since his powers are also fire it’s going to be a bit hard to implement them as scars since the marks are very much like claw marks. But I’m sure I’ll think of something.
Anyway, thanks for the help Lemon, I greatly appreciate it.