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for a first try, decent

Basically look good for a beginner at all
However when he proceed to break a door, his hand didn’t reach enough space for crowbar can break the locker, also is that a phosphorus grenade? Because it did cause fire at the end instead of flashing fire with smokes and it look so smol, it is not visible to see the grenade in the hand

And then all the Gradient men get melted by the giant sun

The end

Then they go racist

Nuh uh

It isn’t on, is it?