• Replying to comment by: Shadey anims@epitaph200 at this moment. I am very unsure if this dude is

    So does the background story need a bit of touching up or try coming up with another one?

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  • Replying to comment by: Shadey anims@epitaph200 at this moment. I am very unsure if this dude is

    Wow is this a dream or am i getting a bit of good reviews

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  • Replying to comment by: TheGamerXI think is good

    Do you mean the character or bg story? Cuz im honestly so confused with how to work it out

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  • @epitaph200 at this moment. I am very unsure if this dude is good enough because of the confusion of his background so help plz. Also i made an odachi before you actually suggested it,cuz like u said katanas are done for, but the only reason why i had a katana there was because i forgot to change it

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    • I think is good

      2018-09-16 22:34:26 UTC 1
    • Wow is this a dream or am i getting a bit of good reviews

      2018-09-16 22:51:52 UTC 0
    • So does the background story need a bit of touching up or try coming up with another one?

      2018-09-16 22:54:40 UTC 0
  • Replying to comment by: UnknownOkay, I’m not even going to care till you shorten this down

    OK SURE!
    THE NIGGA(yes im black) TOUCHED A GEM.INHERITED THE GEMS POWER THAT WAS USED BY AN EMPEROR CENTURIES AGO.WHEN HIS GRANDPA WAS KILLED BY BAD MAN\’S HENCHMEN BECAUSE OF HIM GETTING THE STONE, HE MOVED AWAY TO HIS GRANDPAS FRIEND.GRANDPAS FRIEND ONE OF GREATEST MARTIAL ARTIST. SHADEY WANT TO LEARN.
    GRANDPAS FRIEND TRAIN HIM. SHADEY NOW GOOD FIGHTER. AFTER 1 YEAR TRAINING, WENT TRAVEL, BUT GO LOOK AT OLD HOME FIRST. NOW LITTLE DO HE KNOW, BAD MAN WHO LOOK FOR HIM FOR GEM GO AND LOCKDOWN DA CITY FOR HIM, MAKING EVERYBODY TINK SHADEY IS BAD MAN. HE GO CITY GET CAUGHT, CAPTURE TO R3MOV3 GEM, BUT BREAK FREE, NOW HE MUST RUN AWAY AND STAY AWARE CUZ HE IS CONVICT ALL OVER DA COUNTRY.

    THERE YOU GO☺

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  • Replying to comment by: CookieInTheFaceYou know what it looks like >_>

    What do you mean?

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  • Replying to comment by: GEYThat sucks, demon forms, fire powers, dead parents, katana.

    And if you thought that the infano basuto technique is a demon form, its not. Its japanese for inferno burst. He creates an actual fire within his body and converts the fire into a gaseous energy that spread internally through his body, giving him a red glow externally. Its a technique he created himself.

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  • Yes. He doesn\’t look completely like a whole damn demon, with tail or spikes or skin color change. There just a change with the normal fire power cuz it changes to hell fire which is hotter than normal fire especially if blue. His teeth gets a bit a bit sharp, the surface of his skin gets harder than it is, and eye pupil changes.

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  • Replying to comment by: Shadey animsHiashi “Shadey” Takahashi Powers: Pyrokinesis(manipulation

    My charcters ability trait needs to be changed so my bad

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  • Replying to comment by: GEYThat sucks, demon forms, fire powers, dead parents, katana.

    Im not finished with the bg story. And also forgot to add that he was about 7 when his parents die. I think that if i came up with something like: his parents were killed, now hes coming back for revenge and is full of hatred and stuff, then that would sound very generic. And there is only one form, no other ones. And made it balanced out buy making that form vigorously hard to control.

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  • Replying to comment by: Ashdzjtry to step away from “he did a thing and it made him a supe

    Oh, well i was supposed to change that one so sorry about that.

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  • Replying to comment by: TheGamerXShow a pic

    Im doing a couple changes today so ill show him sometime later today

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  • Hiashi “Shadey” Takahashi

    Powers: Pyrokinesis(manipulation of fire) and Infernokinesis(manipulation of hell fire)
    – Has a technique mode named infano basuto which makes him faster and stronger.
    – He was made a part demon by touching a demonic flame gem which is also how he got his fire power
    – If consumed with anger and grief he can finally tap into his demon form for the first time and the able to use Infernokinesis
    – He’s great in kasaijustu or just any martial arts
    -He can create explosions with his hands which would be great in combat
    -In his demon form he uses this big move call Blue Blaze. Its burns the enemy greatly but slowly and can only be put out by the user. The fire from that can last for 7 days.
    -Has a katana and throwing hat blade
    – Being part demon gives him abilities such as being very agile and persistent, extraordinary strength and the ability to jump very high.

    Limitations: When in demon form, Shadey is hard to control and it can lead to lots of destruction and can cause shadey to be fully possessed in demon form. Especially with his hell fire manipulation. These flames cant be put out by water ice or strongest of wind and is hard to control as well. It can be put out by holy water or just by shadey himself.
    -As for normal fire manipulation, its basic weaknesses are with ice, water, cold temperature.
    *(Shadey\’s parents were great journalist and explorers who have done some of the greatest reasearch ever. Sadly his parents were killed in a car accident)*One day as Shadey was upon the forest, he stumbled donw a steep hill, barreling himself into a ditch. In confusion of what had happen, he tried to figure out how he would come out of the ditch. Even if it was a ditch, it was pretty spacious, with a leveled floor with, and the sun shine through the large opening he created, which helped him to see more clearly.. He then realized he was within ruins of some sort of underground chamber. As he walked around to hopefully find some sort door, he saw a bright ray of red shining through a wall of dirt. It seemed to be a gem that was nearly submerged with in the wall. With his bare hands, he scratched and scratched through the wall, and finally , the scarlet red gem was revealed. Shadey grabbed the gem and marveled upon it. But even so if the gem was a piece of beauty, there was something strange about it. Within the gem, were great flames that were roaring, and on the outside of the gem, there was a writing engraved in it, but it was of an ancient language. Shadey recognized this ancient language that his parents taught him as childbut he couldnt understand the words to it. So in no hesitation, he place the gem in his bag, found a door that led to the outside and quickly ran home.

    Ill make the rest later cuz its 1am

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    • @epitaph200 @thegamerxcrf
      Destroy this nerd and his crappy application

      2018-09-15 06:17:58 UTC 1
    • Show a pic

      2018-09-15 06:33:20 UTC 0
    • try to step away from “he did a thing and it made him a super strong demon” other than that it’s close to passable I guess

      2018-09-15 15:27:00 UTC 2
      • Replying to: Ashdzjtry to step away from “he did a thing and it made him a supe

        Oh, well i was supposed to change that one so sorry about that.

        2018-09-15 16:51:16 UTC 0
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      That sucks, demon forms, fire powers, dead parents, katana.
      well done you made a generic rhg (not oc because its not original)

      2018-09-15 15:43:29 UTC 1
      • Replying to: GEYThat sucks, demon forms, fire powers, dead parents, katana.

        Im not finished with the bg story. And also forgot to add that he was about 7 when his parents die. I think that if i came up with something like: his parents were killed, now hes coming back for revenge and is full of hatred and stuff, then that would sound very generic. And there is only one form, no other ones. And made it balanced out buy making that form vigorously hard to control.

        2018-09-15 17:00:18 UTC 0
      • Replying to: GEYThat sucks, demon forms, fire powers, dead parents, katana.

        And if you thought that the infano basuto technique is a demon form, its not. Its japanese for inferno burst. He creates an actual fire within his body and converts the fire into a gaseous energy that spread internally through his body, giving him a red glow externally. Its a technique he created himself.

        2018-09-15 17:26:28 UTC 0
    • My charcters ability trait needs to be changed so my bad

      2018-09-15 17:03:44 UTC 0
    • Yes. He doesn’t look completely like a whole damn demon, with tail or spikes or skin color change. There just a change with the normal fire power cuz it changes to hell fire which is hotter than normal fire especially if blue. His teeth gets a bit a bit sharp, the surface of his skin gets harder than it is, and eye pupil changes.

      2018-09-15 17:14:28 UTC 0
  • @thegamerxcrf @epitaph200 i still wasn\’t classified

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  • Replying to comment by: TheGamerXThe figure in your profile pic?, sure.

    Ok 👍

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