Thinner lines and smoother and less sudden turns on the nodes, i could give you an example? More sound effects too, your animation is fine. I can make your figs look a little better without ruining your style
His hair and head outlines are too thick, if you thinned them, it’d be amazing. I would love your channel and that style. You also need more sound effects, when he raised his arm like that i was expecting a little swish sound effect but nothing happened. You need to smoothen your lines make them less just completely pointy with no round points
Replying to:TPKHis hair and head outlines are too thick, if you thinned the
I kinda liked the thick outlines on his character but I’ll change it and see how it looks during ep 2.As for the sfx yh just added the swoosh thing but it still feels empty like its missing something.Might need to make some good bg music.Anyway thx for your feedback I appreciate it
2019-12-15 18:13:36 UTC 
Thinner lines and smoother and less sudden turns on the nodes, i could give you an example? More sound effects too, your animation is fine. I can make your figs look a little better without ruining your style
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His hair and head outlines are too thick, if you thinned them, it’d be amazing. I would love your channel and that style. You also need more sound effects, when he raised his arm like that i was expecting a little swish sound effect but nothing happened. You need to smoothen your lines make them less just completely pointy with no round points
I kinda liked the thick outlines on his character but I’ll change it and see how it looks during ep 2.As for the sfx yh just added the swoosh thing but it still feels empty like its missing something.Might need to make some good bg music.Anyway thx for your feedback I appreciate it