Okay nevermind you’re the coolest of the cools. The world is nothing to your coolness.

Sinclair401

I have never seen you before, not active on here much. But I saw your pinhead drawing so that automatically makes you cool jn my book.

Idk you much at all, but from I can see youre coo. Got nothing bad to say.
;3

You’re cool too Gigan :3
Mwah ily

Alr lets break this down.

Little details like that are part of the charm in my animations. They are nothing to add, why remove them? I don’t get asking for a downgrade here.

It functionally wont be a downgrade. Its common animator law that there is no point in animating something you cant see. Lighting and graphics is something you see CONSTANTLY. Not for “Particular scenes” It goes with every scene because thats how it works irl. Just like you say you want it to be realistic as possible Also no it doesn’t remove details or obstruct the scene, you just gotta learn how to do it right.

I simply explained that lighting and how you do it is not quite up to a standard that would fit my animations (and much like your idea of small details, would take way too much to put into an action packed 30 minute long animation). If I brainlessly followed 100% of your critique, my animations would lose their soul, take 100x longer and lose focus

I have done a whole 5 min animation with the most quality lighting and visuals in a few weeks (Cornflakes s.2 Ep.2). Granted your animation style is less cartoony so it could take an additional month at most for 5 mins. BUT you have an entire animation team with you making these so its 100% feasible.

You mentioned the lack of detail in the script itself and I made changes there. Never heard if the changes were enough but I made them. I also mentioned I kept things vague for a creative reason

You just contradicted yourself. I critiqued that the script should be FULL and DETAILED but then you go and say that you still kept it vauge for “creative reasons”. It dose not matter its to make a change in the story later or to recon something. The script should always be completed to the rim. No expectations. I have no clue what the “creative reasons” could be but it is no excuse to deliver a script thats underbaked.

Absolutely agree that anything I did before episode 3 had hardly any thought and dialogue consisted of text walls. I fixed that several years ago.

Thats not the issue. Breaking the texts into smaller chunks does not fix the scene. When writintg diolouge and exposistion its best to cut ALL the fat off and even cut some muscle off too in order to make the exposistion/discussion scenes as short and sweet as possible WHILE delivering realistic, compelling dialogue between characters all at the same time. Its a delicate balancing act that crumbles every time.
Having the characters speak in shorter chunks do not fix the issue. An 5 minute long talking scene of yours can easily be cut down to 45sec to 1.5 min and deliver the message in a more compelling way. Before you say thats not possible or its too hard, it is, if I went what would be originally said in my animations before I cut down the fat No One Ch.6 would be 25 minutes. I cut off a whole 10 minutes to deliver all the messages in the best and clean way possible.

The one thing people told me come episode 4 was that it was actually interesting.

It was more interesting and clean but all of the issue still stand. The main thing I can say is “better” is the animation. Its slightly less stiff. There still diouloge, pacing, characterization issues still stand and have a chokehold on the series.

Never in the details video did I have a scene of a stare as a detail.

For this I’m also gonna reference the further messages around this claim.
While back you were lacking in motivation and asked people to point out the details and appreciate it. You even made a channel in your discord server called “detail appreciation” and a person made that video.
What I’m wondering is what part of that was a “joke” cause everything was played very seriously and was pretty unfunny.
(The details video will be linked)

I also gave you critique on a lot of things, much of which you never improved or fixed.

I have improved, quite rapidly.
Look at No One Chapter 3, (Sometime after PL3 came out) bad animation, dialogue and everything and then compare that to Cornflakes s2 ep2. (Sometime after PL4) The animation, characters, visuals, dialogue has improved MASSIVLY. Now with your animation it has functionally barley improved. The most I can say is that its slightly smoother. Thats it. Every single other issue has and still is there.
So for you to turn this onto me and telling me to do better is honestly so baffling and insulting. Take a good look at yourself.

But I gotta finish my house!

Do 1 trillion next

I agree a lot. He prides himself wayy to much on \”little\” details and making unnessisary additions to the animation. Sure it adds realism but now its going to take forever.
Also he tends to have a thick skull. I worked for him before as a consulter/critic for script related things. Whenever something about the animation was amiss or poor you could critique him but then you\’d just get a 5 paragraph message on why youre wrong, hes right, and then we wont change.
It peeves me a lot because he does this for accountability, animation, writing and everything.
I pointed out like a LOT of mess ups in his script and most were either blown off or told to ignore it. Like the script would be missing A LOT of details so it felt like I was reading a bulletin board rather than a script. Got told to just work around that when making my critiques, but how can I make a critique about a scene when i know only like 1/3 of the details in said scene?

All of that combined as made me slowly dislike him.

His animations continue to have the same issue, pragraph blocks, TOO MUCH exposistion, no personalities, basic camrea work, bad pacing.
He focuses SO MUCH on details like a bullet you cant even see moving inside of the chamber & barrel of the gun that he is SEVERLY lacking what makes a series good. Bro makes decent animation and calls it a day.

His lack of open mindedness and proper focus will be the ultimate downfall of his series once people look back on it.

I could also go for a LONG time about that \”PL details\” video like how \”EB death stare\” was just his OC. No real music ques, camrea shot, no empthisis, just his OC sitting there. Death stare, sure buddy.

But I feel as I\’ve said enough.
Lmk if I should re-elaborate or further elaborate on sumthin.