A definite improvement over the last one, I’ll give you that. Now for some feedback:
• The first swing is better than the one in your previous animation, as there’s a lot more speed and you can feel more power coming from it. Though, the end still suffers from rigidness, and the arm hasn’t extended far enough to finish the feel of the momentum stopping, allowing the kinetic energy to be released.
• The second swing seems to have some in-between frames added from the start of the swing to the end, which as a result makes it a downgrade from the last animation as it again feels rigid and not as impactful. But that might be my eyes playing tricks with me, I’m not sure.
• The third swing is on the right track, it’s just missing the few start up frames to stop it from looking too instant.
• The footwork for both the 1st and 2nd swing needs some work, as it doesn’t look too much like they have enough balance to perform those swings without falling over. Make sure they’re taking the right steps in the right places.
Try to fix those issues, because this is otherwise an overall improvement!
A definite improvement over the last one, I’ll give you that. Now for some feedback:
• The first swing is better than the one in your previous animation, as there’s a lot more speed and you can feel more power coming from it. Though, the end still suffers from rigidness, and the arm hasn’t extended far enough to finish the feel of the momentum stopping, allowing the kinetic energy to be released.
• The second swing seems to have some in-between frames added from the start of the swing to the end, which as a result makes it a downgrade from the last animation as it again feels rigid and not as impactful. But that might be my eyes playing tricks with me, I’m not sure.
• The third swing is on the right track, it’s just missing the few start up frames to stop it from looking too instant.
• The footwork for both the 1st and 2nd swing needs some work, as it doesn’t look too much like they have enough balance to perform those swings without falling over. Make sure they’re taking the right steps in the right places.
Try to fix those issues, because this is otherwise an overall improvement!
very nicely said