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    Spidersubscriberuc-winner-lvl1master-noder 2020-12-01 16:08:41 UTC

    This is good?
    I know he needs to improve but it is something

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    • The line goes to far out and doesn’t look that natural of a line like make it flow with the wind

      2020-12-01 16:29:16 UTC 1
      • Replying to: Huddy FiguresThe line goes to far out and doesn’t look that natural of a

        But other wise it’s great

        2020-12-01 16:29:46 UTC 1
    • Overall the stickfigure is really good looking, but the animation is a bit too pause-y, if you know what i mean.
      Couple of tips:

      Try to make him hit the center of the stickfigure instead of the head, it makes it look weird when he punches somebody in the head and they go forward instead of down.

      When making a punch, dont point his fist upwards to prepare for the punch. Make the forearm line up with the arm.

      Add some windup to his attacks. Not just to make it look better, but you are doing this for a fighting animation and you dont want spamminess.

      2020-12-01 16:33:31 UTC 3