@ralph @ramoxfire1 @jkstudios @metshot
Alex and xela

Alex:
Age:15
Hates:Ralph (still no offense)
Weapons:musket,longsword,machete and a khopesh
Favorite food:rice
Personality:angry and emotional

He was born 1998,when he was 15,the Ralph war started he was separated from his brothers Pheonix and xela because he told him to run to survive ralph’s Attacking soldiers,he killed 20 soldiers before Pheonix and xela escaped,after killing 10 more soldiers he ran into the forest to escape ralph’s Soldiers.

Xela:

Age:12
Hates:ralph(still 0 offense)
Weapons:Hunting rifle,Mosin nagat And a Colt 1911
Favorite food:turkey
Personality:emotional

He was born in 2002,when he was 8 he was bullied by his classmates for having 2 differently colored eyes,by the time he was 10 he was angry at the bullies and began beating them up when they insulted him.
When he was 11,the Ralph war started, he was separated from Pheonix and Alex when Alex bravely protected them from ralph’s Soldiers,he found Alex in the forest a day later

What do you think,what should I improve?

@metshot @ralph @ramoxfire1 @jkstudios
Here is a variant of my new OC

Pheonix (survival)

He is Pheonix when he was 13,in the great Ralph war
He watched as Ralph’s soldiers purged the city he was in,robbing everyone,then killing them, he abandoned his house before he was robbed,but now he has to survive the downfall of society in the sticknodes universe
New things about him
Weapons:DB shotgun,Tomahawk, shield chip (summons a energy shield),katana and his flaregun
Hates:Ralph (no offense Ralph,it’s just for the character)
Age:13
Job:none
Personality:serious

What do you think,is there anything I should improve?

(Btw I used my new OC as a base who used a terraria fig as a base,I forgot who the author of the terraria figs was)