Seems to be going somewhere with plot, well done there.

There are still some things to work on though:

– The stances of these characters looked very hunched like two old men at a bar.

– Quite slow even when at normal speeds.

– If you animate it in Stickfigure style it may be easier and appeal to more people, Nicky1612 has some good bases although I see them being used a lot for series.

– Move the camera around a bit and maybe try and add a perspective view from deadpool of bullseye it will add for cinematic effect.

– If you can, upload it to Youtube for better quality and accurate speeds.

– Ask others if they can help so that you can improve and have guidance on certain areas.

Go for it.