Seems to be going somewhere with plot, well done there.
There are still some things to work on though:
– The stances of these characters looked very hunched like two old men at a bar.
– Quite slow even when at normal speeds.
– If you animate it in Stickfigure style it may be easier and appeal to more people, Nicky1612 has some good bases although I see them being used a lot for series.
– Move the camera around a bit and maybe try and add a perspective view from deadpool of bullseye it will add for cinematic effect.
– If you can, upload it to Youtube for better quality and accurate speeds.
– Ask others if they can help so that you can improve and have guidance on certain areas.
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Seems to be going somewhere with plot, well done there.
There are still some things to work on though:
– The stances of these characters looked very hunched like two old men at a bar.
– Quite slow even when at normal speeds.
– If you animate it in Stickfigure style it may be easier and appeal to more people, Nicky1612 has some good bases although I see them being used a lot for series.
– Move the camera around a bit and maybe try and add a perspective view from deadpool of bullseye it will add for cinematic effect.
– If you can, upload it to Youtube for better quality and accurate speeds.
– Ask others if they can help so that you can improve and have guidance on certain areas.
Ok about the old men at a bar no no no there dead pools healing and bullseye is drunk
But ty for advice
Alright
If Bullseye is drunk than make him wobble around a little bit and say some things before randomly throwing a beer bottle.
As for deadpool why donβt you show him with some tears in his suit and wounds.
Try and implement the other features I mentioned as well.