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    Delosubscriberuc-winner-lvl2master-noderoccifer 2020-07-30 01:59:42 UTC

    Finished part 1 of ep1

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    • Have I impacted my career?

      2020-07-30 02:01:13 UTC 0
    • Nice

      2020-07-30 02:04:29 UTC 0
    • Seems to be going somewhere with plot, well done there.

      There are still some things to work on though:

      – The stances of these characters looked very hunched like two old men at a bar.

      – Quite slow even when at normal speeds.

      – If you animate it in Stickfigure style it may be easier and appeal to more people, Nicky1612 has some good bases although I see them being used a lot for series.

      – Move the camera around a bit and maybe try and add a perspective view from deadpool of bullseye it will add for cinematic effect.

      – If you can, upload it to Youtube for better quality and accurate speeds.

      – Ask others if they can help so that you can improve and have guidance on certain areas.

      2020-07-30 02:07:55 UTC 2
      • Replying to: Tastylemon16Seems to be going somewhere with plot, well done there. The

        Ok about the old men at a bar no no no there dead pools healing and bullseye is drunk

        2020-07-30 02:13:32 UTC 0
        • Replying to: DeloOk about the old men at a bar no no no there dead pools heal

          But ty for advice

          2020-07-30 02:17:57 UTC 0
        • Replying to: DeloOk about the old men at a bar no no no there dead pools heal

          Alright

          If Bullseye is drunk than make him wobble around a little bit and say some things before randomly throwing a beer bottle.

          As for deadpool why don’t you show him with some tears in his suit and wounds.

          Try and implement the other features I mentioned as well.

          2020-07-30 02:18:11 UTC 2