Is this a good enough design?

Name: Carter Verner Marich or Patient #1996

Nationality: German

Personality: Often calm and level headed, but with strength and endurance to match. Was known to have used these skills to rob multiple stores at gunpoint and to evade capture after doing so.

Has a history of sub-psychotic rage when the topic of his father is brought up.

Affiliations: Known to be a member of the DeLuca Crime Family

Look: He often wears the suits and fedora of his late father, and a mask gained from his time as a patient in an unknown asylum in the 1910s

Weapons: He often brings German weapons, though mostly a Mauser C96 pistol and a Astra Model 900 semi automatic pistol as his main weapons

@jurygamer