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Unfinished stuff
No sounds, music, filter, etc
Whats gonna happen:
A guy looks at him asking him who the protag is.
He tells the protag hes not welcome here
The protag tells him “I dont very much like your tone” (inspo from Wannabe Outlaws bio)
The guy starts getting his hand closer to his gun
They get in a standoff, protag blows the guys head off
Protag keeps walking and enters the bar, which leads to the footage I already have finished of the drinking.
There will be a bar fight (due to his newly acclaimed bounty) and a final standoff with the bounty hunter(s)
Thoughts
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5 votes



decent storyline, though could be tweaked to be even better. can’t wait to see the full film!
Yeah i tweaked it. Made it more of a sequel
Protag walks in the bar, drinks a bit
The leader of the gangs in this town walks in
(The guy he shot before entering was a gang member)
They both point a gun at each other.
The protag recognizes the gang leader. It was the same guy he had a standoff with in the first short film.
The leader insists they not make a mess in the bar
Rather instead, he has put a bounty on his head. Whoever kills him gets a prize.
A bar fight initiates
Its a pretty long sequence
He walks out the bar when hes finished, pretty bruised
He sees the leader
He follows him to the gang camp
Gunfight happens
Protag wins gunfight
The gang leader was hiding
The gang leader follows protag back to town
Gang leader shouts at protag to get his attention
They finally have their standoff, final last time.
Gang leader dies
Protag walks away
End sequence
(Still some plot holes, like why the gang leader had a standoff with the protag in the 1st film, before he was a gang leader. I also havent given the characters any names)
awesome, looks pretty good, keep it up!