• Profile picture of that alien dude

    that alien dudesubscriberocciferpro-noder 2022-05-09 15:47:11 UTC

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    • Have him being weighed down since he literally has zombies climbing on his back, and maybe add some impact with the punches and stuff with a slight screen shake and faster movement

      The dashes and stuff could use some work because it looks like they are just sticking to him like a magnet, have them lunge at him with their arms out or something

      2022-05-09 15:56:00 UTC 12
    • What are you testing? If you said, maybe I could give more detailed advice.

      Generally though,
      – The character isn’t moved by any of the people jumping on him, it just looks like they’re balloons
      – You need to translate the impact using screen shakes and recoil for each heavy attack
      – Minor mistakes, the paper floats on his side, the elevator closes to the right
      – The punch feels like a tap and has no weight, you gotta show something to give power
      – There’s a little bit of jitteriness around here and there

      Main problems are with weight and impact. You need to show that each movement has value, so the watcher can tell what’s goin’ on.

      2022-05-09 16:06:51 UTC 12