SGA.
You’ve done something no other Scarf User has done, and it has 100% impressed me.
You tried something new,
Action in Elements has finally took the role it should be, the spice that stands out, that little sweetness amongst more calm scenes. You finally made plot the priority and i applaude that, a move well done and well excecuted for a first try at that!
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As i consider myself a critique, I’ll also mention a few little bits you did wrong. Don’t feel threatened by this, i by no means want you to fail, i say this because i want you to do well my warm apparel wearing friend.
First off is design. While I’m fine with the guest showups like Heckray (PS: should’ve added Epitaph, lol) or Kaido as those aren’t your own designs, i feel the current characters like our antagonist Raze, Volt or… blue… man *checks list* s**t that’s a lot of blue guys.
Basically, you need to really find a way to make characters stand out from one another. This could be by giving certain ones hair (being as you’re going for a DBZ style) or even an outfit like robes, training gear or even as little as a loin cloth. These little extra bits can make the character stand out better and avoids you having to make characters refer to eachother by name 24/7.
Second would be how lore is delivered in the first bit in the void. I found it interesting how you layed it out but if you used your amazing animation skills to show these elements doing their things, it’d be so much more interesting. Without this, it may turn off most of your current fans who expect non stop action (which is harmful to the story).
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Lastly I’ll just touch on some tiny nitpicks that aren’t as important put I’ll point out nontheless if you’re truly wanting to improve.
1) I don’t see why a Tournament would be going on with a world ending being like Raze about.
2) everyone’s near identical
3) half horn demon should’ve lived longer cause i liked his design the most
4) beep beep lettuce
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PS: maybe consider in depth tutorials on how to make certain effects. I’ve attempted some of the effects you do and just can’t pull it off, going into the tutorial field would be an immense help to animators like myself. You’re viewers will probably enjoy it too as those kinds of vids seem popular in the Scarf community.
Replying to:UnknownSGA.
You’ve done something no other Scarf User has done, and
this post impressed me and thus I will check out this a n i m a t o r y sometime
well done for not being a jerk about it like the many times you have.
gonna be honest, i lost most of my respect for you during the whole toxic fiasco, (as you probably did for me) but this post shows that you have changed, something I truly doubted you would do.
well done.
(no digs at toxic here please, trying to convey happy impressed vibes so keep it respectful or I may change my mind about this post >_>)
Replying to:dezwaythis post impressed me and thus I will check out this a n i
All I’ll say is…
I TOLD YOU SO
HAHAHAHHAHAAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHHA-
okay, sorry, it’s a joke.
But, yeah, as i said, what i do is for the community. While i will always have some form of selfish motive (or i’d f**kin’ die), i will always prioritise the benefits of others. I’ve changed over the years, once like a tyrant, even snapping at my own fans for using my figs without telling me, now i can actually stand a Scarf Anim.
While I’ll probably never like pure combat ones, I’ve already watched my fill back in my Secondary School years (High School), I will still look out for and try to help out those who are willing to do better and change for the good of it.
So yeah, i was KINDA in the wrong in that Drama but you need to understand that it’s heavily outweighed by the fact Toxic refused to do what would actually fix the drama (which did, lol). Like i said all that time back, i WANTED help and while i was exiled to Discord, i got that help. From the following heroes:
Knife Rulez
Mouser64
Red/Drik
Pathetic Child
Snipper
And Scorpio
Replying to:UnknownDude
You kinda like
Were on Toxic’s side
You didn’t ‘support
i did defend you in certain situations, (that I can’t actually remember off the top of my head) I wasn’t biased towards toxic nor you, i believed that toxic was more right most of the time but I still defended you whenever I saw fit.
*wants to mention epitaph*
User Banned
It’s okay
It wasn’t awful
It was actually decent
@epitaph200
Your fun has been ruined >:D
whos epitaph?
Guy who has popular opinions
so he complains a lot or something?
STOP STOP STOP STOP STOP STOP STOP
this can only end in petty drama
Hella Exposition Dump in the beginning of the episode
User Banned
B e t t e r – t h a n – n o n e – a t – a l l
Oh snap it’s that popular series
User Banned
SGA.
You’ve done something no other Scarf User has done, and it has 100% impressed me.
You tried something new,
Action in Elements has finally took the role it should be, the spice that stands out, that little sweetness amongst more calm scenes. You finally made plot the priority and i applaude that, a move well done and well excecuted for a first try at that!
————————————————-
As i consider myself a critique, I’ll also mention a few little bits you did wrong. Don’t feel threatened by this, i by no means want you to fail, i say this because i want you to do well my warm apparel wearing friend.
First off is design. While I’m fine with the guest showups like Heckray (PS: should’ve added Epitaph, lol) or Kaido as those aren’t your own designs, i feel the current characters like our antagonist Raze, Volt or… blue… man *checks list* s**t that’s a lot of blue guys.
Basically, you need to really find a way to make characters stand out from one another. This could be by giving certain ones hair (being as you’re going for a DBZ style) or even an outfit like robes, training gear or even as little as a loin cloth. These little extra bits can make the character stand out better and avoids you having to make characters refer to eachother by name 24/7.
Second would be how lore is delivered in the first bit in the void. I found it interesting how you layed it out but if you used your amazing animation skills to show these elements doing their things, it’d be so much more interesting. Without this, it may turn off most of your current fans who expect non stop action (which is harmful to the story).
—————————————————
Lastly I’ll just touch on some tiny nitpicks that aren’t as important put I’ll point out nontheless if you’re truly wanting to improve.
1) I don’t see why a Tournament would be going on with a world ending being like Raze about.
2) everyone’s near identical
3) half horn demon should’ve lived longer cause i liked his design the most
4) beep beep lettuce
————————————————
PS: maybe consider in depth tutorials on how to make certain effects. I’ve attempted some of the effects you do and just can’t pull it off, going into the tutorial field would be an immense help to animators like myself. You’re viewers will probably enjoy it too as those kinds of vids seem popular in the Scarf community.
this post impressed me and thus I will check out this a n i m a t o r y sometime
well done for not being a jerk about it like the many times you have.
gonna be honest, i lost most of my respect for you during the whole toxic fiasco, (as you probably did for me) but this post shows that you have changed, something I truly doubted you would do.
well done.
(no digs at toxic here please, trying to convey happy impressed vibes so keep it respectful or I may change my mind about this post >_>)
User Banned
All I’ll say is…
I TOLD YOU SO
HAHAHAHHAHAAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHHA-
okay, sorry, it’s a joke.
But, yeah, as i said, what i do is for the community. While i will always have some form of selfish motive (or i’d f**kin’ die), i will always prioritise the benefits of others. I’ve changed over the years, once like a tyrant, even snapping at my own fans for using my figs without telling me, now i can actually stand a Scarf Anim.
While I’ll probably never like pure combat ones, I’ve already watched my fill back in my Secondary School years (High School), I will still look out for and try to help out those who are willing to do better and change for the good of it.
So yeah, i was KINDA in the wrong in that Drama but you need to understand that it’s heavily outweighed by the fact Toxic refused to do what would actually fix the drama (which did, lol). Like i said all that time back, i WANTED help and while i was exiled to Discord, i got that help. From the following heroes:
Knife Rulez
Mouser64
Red/Drik
Pathetic Child
Snipper
And Scorpio
k i n d a
also me not being in the “following heroes” tab slightly angers my humanly greedy side because any publicity is good publicity 😉
also because I wanted to help but I ain’t on discord
User Banned
Dude
You kinda like
Were on Toxic’s side
You didn’t ‘support’ per say
More turned down any and everything i said lol
i did defend you in certain situations, (that I can’t actually remember off the top of my head) I wasn’t biased towards toxic nor you, i believed that toxic was more right most of the time but I still defended you whenever I saw fit.
i stand by my actions for either side.
Yeet yeet holy sh*t