Aight, so here’s my first draft of a fight animation between some random russian bastard and a depressed red jester
I would absolutely love to hear thoughts, ideas and criticisms for this because if anything, I just want this to seem feasible

Mellow’s Just Desserts (may be a pun or the correct spelling)

Setting:
• Blank white space with tree in the middle
• Grey ground
• Tree serves as marker for middle of the stage
• Grey hexagon like background (or normal grey grid) with parallax

1st Draft of plan:
• Camera on the right side of tree, small amount of shake
• Mellow backflip jumps in from the right side of the scene, lands while facing right. Camera shifts slightly and smoothly with his movement
• Mellow looks shocked and scared at something off screen then does a short hop to his left
• Almost immediately after, a random chef lands heavily where Mellow jumped from, leaves cracks on the ground. This is done in slow motion for a brief movement with the camera shaking up and down to emulate the feel of the impact
• Mellow looks in fear and attempts to run towards the tree. The camera follows in him doing so
• Chef throws a butcher knife at tree, which surprises Mellow and makes him stop and slip in his tracks. The camera also follows Mellow here, slowly moving back as he does
• Chef dashes towards Mellow after pulling a frying pan from his back, saying “YOU FORGOT THE BLOODY BILL”
• Chef successfully hits Mellow on the back of his head which makes him stumble forward and fall onto the ground. He turns while sitting to face Chef, then immediately looks distraught. The camera moves along quickly with Mellow.
• Chef jumps upwards, attempting to deal a final blow, Mellow rolls backwards onto his feet, screaming “F*CK YOUR BILL”. The Camera follows the Chef as he jumps upwards
• Chef lands on the ground with the pan slamming against the floor, leaving another crack, but gets it stuck in the process. The camera follows him down
• Chef attempts to pull the pan out but it is thoroughly stuck there
• Mellow runs towards Chef and football kicks his head which makes him flip backwards. Pan is left in the ground. Camera follows Chef as he’s blown back
• A cheer sound effect is heard with Mellow briefly looking proudly and boasting
• Chef slams a big long piece of cutlery (Ideally a spatula) into the ground, swings around 3 times before speeding up, with energy crackling around him. Camera shaking speeds up as he does
• Mellow looks onwards in confusion before realising with an exasperated look as to what Chef is about to pull. Right after he says “F*cking twa-” Chef launches right towards him at a high speed, with the piece of cutlery left in the ground bent towards the right. Camera follows Chef normally and the cheering is cut off by a crowd gasp
• Chef pulls out another pan and starts comboing Mellow. One hit downwards on the head followed by a hit upwards that launches Mellow, followed by an air kick in the stomach
• Mellow is launched again backwards, but recovers on his feet and starts throwing his Stylus Knives at Chef. The camera follows Mellow backwards and still moves back ever so slightly while the knives are thrown
•  After doing so, he runs towards Chef using the knives as a distraction, the camera follows as per usual
• Chef deflects them all, not noticing a depressed red jester running at him at full speed
• Mellow jumps upwards and attempts to drop kick Chef in the face
• It works, for the most part, but they end up all over each other and Chef begins to pick Mellow up with him struggling to escape his grasp
• Chef throws Mellow into the piece of cutlery head first which knocks it out of the ground and cracks his mask. He spins a few times after hitting it and lands on his face again, laying on his front. The camera follows Mellow’s self induced pain
• Now Mellow is really pissed, he gets up on his fours, then on a knee, then stands up to face Chef while slouched over. Chef himself looks towards Mellow, ready for a counteract
• Mellow begins to speak and while the camera cuts to a close up of him while he does so, he begins saying something along the lines of “Now this… this is just unfair. What kinda chef are you anyways, giving me a burnt piece of flesh rather than the beef that I ordered?”
• The camera cuts to a close up of the chef who says “You order beef, I get you beef. What more you could possibly want?” In a deep Russian accent (of course)
• He walks up to the tree and takes the butcher’s knife out of it and says “If you have problem, contact customer service.”
• He continues walking with a close up of his feet doing so until he eventually stops in his tracks
• The camera cuts to the two characters on a side each of the scene.
• It then cuts to Mellow, looking more annoyed than angry now. He pulls out his Core Stylus, juggles it for a brief moment and then activates Lance Mode. He then says with a smug look “Nah, piss off.”
• The camera cuts back to the Chef, who readies himself…[Read more]

@verythickbacn Hey, stop sending me friend requests, I\’m sorry but I\’m just not interested

Anyone have any tips for what makes a good fight animation? I\’ve always wanted to make one but choreography and stuff like that has never really been my forte. If anything though, I should probably plan it out first