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You know, I was gonna say this is kinda weird plot and makes no sense nor was it planned over before hand but like..That really do be how some anime plots be like so go for it I guess.. Jokes aside, if your actually considering making this into a series or something, a lot a plot holes are

1#: “Oh, she’s also a vampire” What how when and why???? Just some random person is a vampire for no reason?? is their any reason for her to be vampire that actually adds to the story??? And if you do have a reason, you need to incorporate HOW she became one or like.. why she became one?? and does that mean theres more vampires?? do they play a part in the story??

2#: Why would you send a team of military “defend something” but they don’t know what they’re defending, that cause some tension?? maybe some sort of argument between the characters (if you actually choose to keep this/utilize it). If not, at least take the time to give them a reason for being there

3#: How did the dinosaurs come to life? some random magic??? something you already know and won’t tell until later on?? if so than I hope you have it planned because it can’t just be told some random time later or else its gonna boring, it should be a gradually a surprise that moves on slowly to figuring out what happened to make them undead. AND HOW ARE THE DINOSAUR CORPSES PERFECTLY PRESERVED??? were they running tests on it?? maybe secret CIA shit?? and if so why would the military send them to that island???

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Outstanding

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