first off that little intro of yours at the start is clean and quick and memorable so 10/10

nice quick recap too that’s actually useful for SN series, as it def helps ppl who even haven’t watched older eps at least have a clue wtf is going on

good animation tho and nice scenery and quick text (ppl often drag on with dialog a lot)
but def needs more meat to the episode, there really was no buildup to anything
if you’re gonna do these short episodes (which is good, ppl will watch those) u should plan/pace it out better where each episode has a clear beginning/middle+climax/end + maybe some cliffhanger for the next episode