gj with the idea of a clan collab for an episodic type of series, i like that a lot
in terms of the plot, once the collab-y part was done, lots of “plot”/dialogue – which is cool, you (Levi) did good balancing it with a lot of visuals/movement during the text, vs just static scenes
i think needed a bit more visual “wow” near the end as a payoff and balance to all the previous reading stuff tho, and as a cliffhanger for the next episode
First off, humor is very out of place here and ruins the tone in a lot of scenes. Second off, character designs arent anything special, especially for how many characters are brought into this episode. Though in it, there’s a lack of introduction. You have a plot, but not much going on that makes sense. A lot of pointless events and lack of explanation, character personalities aren’t conveyed well and a lot don’t differenciate. Visually this is inconsistent. One shot, there will be a clutter of effects and it will look good to a degree, then the next there will be next to now detail. The character designs are consistently generic and the writing seems to assume we know who these characters are. Except, like two people will know who they are.
gj with the idea of a clan collab for an episodic type of series, i like that a lot
in terms of the plot, once the collab-y part was done, lots of “plot”/dialogue – which is cool, you (Levi) did good balancing it with a lot of visuals/movement during the text, vs just static scenes
i think needed a bit more visual “wow” near the end as a payoff and balance to all the previous reading stuff tho, and as a cliffhanger for the next episode
epico
Omg.
EPICO WE EPIC this is epic
This is An Awesome animation I wish i could make something like this
Love this ?
PL Team Slave OwnerFirst off, humor is very out of place here and ruins the tone in a lot of scenes. Second off, character designs arent anything special, especially for how many characters are brought into this episode. Though in it, there’s a lack of introduction. You have a plot, but not much going on that makes sense. A lot of pointless events and lack of explanation, character personalities aren’t conveyed well and a lot don’t differenciate. Visually this is inconsistent. One shot, there will be a clutter of effects and it will look good to a degree, then the next there will be next to now detail. The character designs are consistently generic and the writing seems to assume we know who these characters are. Except, like two people will know who they are.
2/5 a series must do better than that.