Machine Wars Ep 4

Machine Wars Ep 4

An animation by Profile PhotoLB GROUPS SN spotlighted on Tuesday June 23, 2020

Alright this took me 1 month and 1 week to animate this, it really took a lot of time.
The animation looks kinda weird, it's because of the exporting thing and I'm really really really sorry.

And thanks to the people who really help me with this.

Enjoy and pls like and subscribe.

Overall: 3.92 / 5
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Visuals: 4.1 / 5 Story: 3.6 / 5 Humor: 2.7 / 5

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LBGSN
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Yas thanks

not لටʂǶ
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not لටʂǶoccifercrusaderuc-votersubscriberfeatured-lvl4uc-winner-lvl4legendary-noderaka autoangel

excellent stuff

LBGSN
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Thanks

Idontknowhowtodraw
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Awesome stuff! Are you making these backgrounds or downloading them. Don’t get very many ones that aren’t anime LOL!

LBGSN
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I download some stuff and make the others

Soupmann
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Soupmannoccifersubscriberuc-winner-lvl3master-noderuc-voterfeatured-lvl2It’s me, the soup

Ok criticism time:

First off is the camera shake is unnecessary, it doesn’t feel like It’d fit in the non action scenes mostly.

Secondly the pacing is way too fast, the text was fast and i could just barely finish reading what they say and some scenes were just confusing like where the green guy leaves on some ship? A ship docking there could’ve helped with this and some other scenes where they magically appear, Some walking sounds were absent which didn’t really bother me but could’ve been put in for better quality

Third, the robots talk like humans, idk if this was intended but they just sounded human and less like a.i with all the “hmmm” and “oh no”

Apart from the complaints i have with this animation, the animation itself is awesome, the way they fight and sound are epic especially the robot dismemberments those were awesome. The figs were also my favorite due to how complex yet simple their design is and the way the move and such

Overall; could use improvement on some of the sound and pacing but is amazing stuff nonetheless

8/10 soupreview

LBGSN
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Yes thanks for this

Soupmann
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Soupmannoccifersubscriberuc-winner-lvl3master-noderuc-voterfeatured-lvl2It’s me, the soup

No problem, keep up the good work lad!

Kane
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KaneLoser

VERY COOL

LBGSN
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Thanks

Explosive Bullet
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Explosive Bulletoccifercrusaderuc-votersubscriberlegendary-noderfeatured-lvl3uc-winner-lvl4PL Team Slave Owner

Hands down the thing that carries this series is the action. Storytelling on the other hand is very lacking. The villians have no motive, the pacing is all over the place and characters aren’t well defined. Pretty much the story has a lot to work on. Character names aren’t brought up to introduce them and the events aren’t very big. They have little to no effect and it’s hard to understand where things start and what exactly the plot it. But on the other hand the visuals are also pretty good. While not Project Landfall level of detail, it has a lot of detail which makes the series much easier to look at. This series has plenty of potential but the story is holding it down. Slow the pacing down, refine the dialogue, work on reinforcing the personalities of each character and you will have something pretty big.
Low 3/5

LBGSN
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Yep the story telling is lacking, I’m just not good at making a story and also thanks for this