I’m just gonna start off an say that this is a good attempt at bringing that life story animation thing into SN. Your trying something different and I love that. But now to the problems and things that this did well. The way alot of this was told was pretty good visually. Now the visuals themselves are a little lacking, they get the point across with where the setting is, but they don’t capture many details beyond that. The way characters are put together and their designs is lower quality. The facial animation is a fine start, but not anything spectacular. The way things are exaggerated can show some pretty good humor, but the humor attempted through annihilating the viewers sense of hearing with increased volume and bass out of knowhere hurts the comedy and video quality. The animation quality is lacking and some of the way the story is told is also lacking. The story is constantly missing some details and the way is flows is all over the place. But that’s not saying you dont have potential with this. This isn’t quite a genre I’m a fan of, but I believe there’s a lot of people out there looking for this content. You just need to perfect it and gradually figure out what works.
2/5