Animation is legit pretty decent enough
I can’t comment on story since I ain’t a writer I’ll let someone else do that
But
there’s a lot of spelling errors and the dialogue is awkward at times.
tho i liked what you did with some of the scenes to make them different than the usual, like around 1:12 with the silouettes, that was pretty cool
gl yo, if you continue with the animation side of things, definitely just keep at it and practicing, pay attention to how others animate certain movements utilizing smooth framing, easing, and things like swishes/smears to emphasize movement
I appreciate your feed back very much. I’ve noticed these mistakes and have changed them in parts 2 and 3 but I still appreciate that you’ve watched and enjoyed
Animation is legit pretty decent enough
I can’t comment on story since I ain’t a writer I’ll let someone else do that
But
there’s a lot of spelling errors and the dialogue is awkward at times.
what milk said is true
tho i liked what you did with some of the scenes to make them different than the usual, like around 1:12 with the silouettes, that was pretty cool
gl yo, if you continue with the animation side of things, definitely just keep at it and practicing, pay attention to how others animate certain movements utilizing smooth framing, easing, and things like swishes/smears to emphasize movement
I appreciate your feed back very much. I’ve noticed these mistakes and have changed them in parts 2 and 3 but I still appreciate that you’ve watched and enjoyed