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Sandman BackstoryAlfred Peterson was an aviator pilot that got lost in 1953
Nobody knew where he went but he crashed in the desert and got buried in sand
after a very long time archeologists found a strange shape in the sand.. it looked like a body. They tried to move the sand to see what who was under it but no one was there. All of a sudden the archeologists were attacked
by the…. sand?Next thing they knew was a strange figure emerged from the sand
it was Alfred!After he killed the archeologists police discovered him. They knew if something this powerful was unleashed to the city it would be terrible.
So they contained him in a special box and released him on a deserted island surrounded by water, and wherever there’s water, he cant go.Once Spider-Man was created he was looking through police files to solve crime
then they saw an island, he wondered why this was on there
He went to the island and got attacked by the Sand Manand that’s it
again please tell me if there’s anything I should change to this story





That’s pretty solid actually.
But how did those sands somehow get infused with his DNA to make him Sandman, something regarding his abilities might be worth looking into.
You could say the location and time was what caused it and that some kind of magic affected his molecular structure thus making him Sandman, this way you can tie magic into your series for more plot points and characters.
yea, thanks lemon!
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