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    Kingston ๐Ÿ’šsubscriberocciferuc-winner-lvl3pro-noder 2022-01-08 03:52:01 UTC

    Currently working on an AVA

    Thoughts?

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    • Imo its a little choppy, but tell me what you think

      edit: good god Vimeo drops the FPS by a lot jeez this looks terrible now
      Trust me, it wont be this bad when its uploaded to YT

      2022-01-08 03:52:34 UTC 4
    • This is pretty fresh ngl
      Ava is something I could never do good lol

      2022-01-08 04:53:21 UTC 4
    • amazing

      2022-01-08 04:57:28 UTC 2
    • @tastylemon16 @teamwest @teothedan sorry for the mentions

      u guys are the best at giving advice, whats ur opinions

      2022-01-08 05:32:09 UTC 1
      • Replying to: Kingston ๐Ÿ’š@tastylemon16 @teamwest @teothedan sorry for the mentions u

        I lowkey liked the animation, youโ€™ve improved. I think the stick figure could have a bit more easing in and out when it turns and a more cartoony flow, but the mouse animation was really good

        2022-01-08 18:25:13 UTC 3
        • Replying to: teo diggity danI lowkey liked the animation, youโ€™ve improved. I think the s

          thx!!

          i made the mouse rotate to give him more character but i wasn’t sure if it was good, so I’m glad you liked it

          2022-01-08 18:41:13 UTC 0
    • I’m not even sure there’s much I can say that needs improvement, this is all just some pretty good stuff

      2022-01-08 09:18:55 UTC 2
    • lol platinum skin moment

      2022-01-08 12:01:13 UTC 0
    • This is looking great so far, youโ€™re doing a good job for pacing of the plot and the animation / design is very nice.

      I have some critiques but they are very minor:
      1. At some point in the animation perhaps have the default or something / someone swap the app skin to the default purely because having a custom skin can get confusing for anyone who isnโ€™t familiar with the idea of one, this way as well you have that original theme in design to work with which will flow better.

      2. The movements could be a tad smoothers and to connect slightly better but honestly itโ€™s not close to looking bad or choppy.

      3. You could use some original sounds just to make it more authentic but it doesnโ€™t matter if not.

      Good job

      2022-01-08 13:58:06 UTC 4
    • oi ralph watchu think 0f this im entirely hoping ur gonna see this on the side comments thing cuz i don’t feel like @ing you

      2022-01-09 18:45:36 UTC 0