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    that alien dudesubscriberocciferpro-noder 2022-02-01 17:36:51 UTC

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    Added some new facts (gonna add some more stuff to the lore later)

    Also reupold of that art

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    • I think you should redo the name cupidwey, it looks “grammatically incorrect”. Just a suggestion.

      2022-02-01 17:38:30 UTC 4
      • Replying to: ColloI think you should redo the name cupidwey, it looks "gramma

        ok

        (also u haven’t been giving advice to me or suggestions lately are u ok?)

        2022-02-01 17:39:50 UTC 1
        • Replying to: that alien dudeok (also u haven't been giving advice to me or suggestions

          The Nodium requires my soul 24/7

          But seriously that post I made based on new lore for your oc is something you could work with. It doesn’t look like you did anything with it so far, or i just haven’t noticed it.

          I also think it’s too early to talk about reproduction. That’s something you should do for fun when you’ve completed most of the lore already.

          2022-02-01 17:44:41 UTC 2
          • Replying to: ColloThe Nodium requires my soul 24/7 But seriously that post I

            I’m still working on it I’ve already did the scenery thing which is sorta progress I guess?

            2022-02-01 17:46:33 UTC 1
            • Replying to: that alien dudeI'm still working on it I've already did the scenery thing

              I think all of what you’re doing is kind of sloppy and unorganized. I can’t keep helping you with this but you really need to restart and go in detail with making a new civilization. You’re still using your old work which in all honesty isn’t that good.

              Talk about how they see the world in a way that’s different from humanity. What species they are, where they are in the universe. You should stop using human standards unless if you want to. They’re aliens afterall.

              2022-02-01 17:49:27 UTC 1