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    Melon Lordsubscriberuc-winner-lvl3pro-noderfeatured-lvl2 2022-03-02 21:48:31 UTC

    Friend gave me some critism in response to my flip. Idk how to feel about it, what do ya’ll think?

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    • The end is kind of wonky. You should also watch out for the footing.

      The way he lands doesn’t seem to have enough impact. Maybe try to imply that he landed hard and stumbled a bit from the landing. His arms seem to move strangely too. Maybe have them go past the knees a bit or one of them on the floor and the other on the leg when he lands.

      2022-03-02 21:54:03 UTC 9
      • Replying to: ColloThe end is kind of wonky. You should also watch out for the

        Literally right after I posted, I made those adjustments XD

        2022-03-02 22:04:18 UTC 17
        • Replying to: Melon LordLiterally right after I posted, I made those adjustments XD

          that looks actually very realistic, almost motion-capture like probs bc of how fluid it is

          flips in general are hard but you did good

          2022-03-02 22:17:21 UTC 15