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Anderson Stridder
2022-07-31 01:33:34 UTC I’m going back to use Stick Nodes again, after a long time, so I can work on my things again! 🙂
I have made some minor changes on my OC.
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A goku-like scarf oc
I personally like the OC. It’s simple, but has a unique enough design to make it different from existing OCs on the site. However, I do think that the scarf and Goku hair may take away from it. The scarf is extremely overused. Plus the Goku hair also is very overused. Plus, it links your series to another. So if you ever use the character outside of dragon ball related projects, it looks out of place.
So assuming you plan to use this character outside of dragon ball projects, here are some recommendations
I would recommend changing the scarf to a new neck item. One of my characters, Flame, as a collar. Still keeping something on his neck while being unique. Instead of a scarf, try a necklace, string for a hat, cape, collar, etc. it keeps the same idea while adding uniqueness.
With the Goku hair, if he has transformations like a sayin, you could make something else on his body change. Maybe a tattoo that grows larger/changes design, attire change, or based on what you have already, a scar that grows and shrinks plus eye color change.
However, if this is purely for dragon ball, you can ignore my recommendations as they wouldn’t make sense in that context.
Overall, this has some potential to be a cool OC, I wish you the best of luck. Let me know if you need assistance with the character/figure.
Thank you…I never received such a comment this big from someone, I feel surprised lol!
The only reason why I made his design like that, is because I wanted him to resemble an adventurer, who explores everything across the world, but that still keeps his warrior instincts, and that’s so the clothes and accessories, that resembles a bit of Lara Croft, and also because I got sick of the same blue shirt, red pants and yellow boots.
Well, I’m going think about a few things…thanks again, buddy, I’ll talk with you later when I need some advice! ^^
Thank you for calling me “big”, never really though about being a big creator on Stick Nodes before. Regardless, I appreciate it, made my day.
“The only reason why I made his design like that, is because I wanted him to resemble an adventurer”. I think you did well with that, as that’s what I thought he was. Most people who make adventuring characters don’t do it nearly as well as you did. Typically they don’t even wear familiar clothing to represent that. Lara Croft is a great reference character. To add, Nathan Drake, Finn, and Indiana Jones are also some classic adventuring characters that would be good references.
I also want to thank you for considering changes to your character. Even if you don’t implement anything new, it’s great to see someone actually consider the advice given to them. Of course, don’t change anything about the character you love. So if the scarf is a must, keep it. My comments were just advice based on what I see overused. However, your character can still be unique with the same gimmicks.
Have a great day.
Same to you, buddy! 🙂 (Sorry for my bad english though)