There are some issues with it. Currently, as Mellow compared it to rhinestone quality, there’s just too many bright colors on the screen at once. You can use bright colors, but it’s just too much all over the place. I think it would be beneficial to dull some of the colors or outright change then. And use the few bright colors you would have as ways to attract the eyes, or to make other things pop.

Additionally, some things aren’t matching. Like the hands are outlined and are more detailed, while the main figures are just stick figures. Plus the swords and eyes are different as well.

It’s great that you’re excited with your work. But it’s just not really there quality wise to make the splash screen at the moment. Though you clearly have passion and worked hard to make this. I think you should focus on making figures or SN art or animating. Then keep remaking the splash screen. That way you can see your progression, and use it as a learning experience. I know I am at the moment with my own splash screen.

Overall, it’s flawed, but I appreciate your work ethic with it. Good luck man.

same vibe