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✈︎ (Grenade Messiah)
2025-09-27 16:18:21 UTC You all better tell me right now if the description is tangible or if it is too long, or something. FEEDBACK!!
please. if it sucks it sucks alright that’s what I’m trying to figure out!! Hah, alright, check this out!
Stick Nodes®
A stickfigure animation app created for mobile devices!
Create your own stickman animations on your Android or iOS device!
Seriously though spent an hour on it it would SUCK to find out it’s not even that good like four months later guys
Don’t tell me in gonna get done dirty here
sigh
Rule #1: It’s a little incomprehensible. It needs to be rewritten in a way that is easy to understand.
“ music with reference of violence/drugs/parental advisory content is allowed” feels out of place in a rule that’s banning music. “just no songs such as I do know AN ISIS ANTHEM!!!” Is clunky to read. “That mf steals every white rappers flow to ever exist.” It isn’t necessary to justify your reason, it’s the rules, so omit it.
Rule #2: “and *sometimes* it’s like trying to blame someone for not liking strawberries, when they don’t like friggin strawberries.” Another overly explained part that adds more clunkiness to the rules. You don’t have to justify your reason. The whole rule could be reworded to something like
“Do not be rude, do not argue, do not be arrogant, and do not insult each other’s music taste.”
The bottom bit about being a crashout queen is funny and cute but you can omit all of that and say “We will call you out if you break these rules.”
Rule #3: It’s good. It doesn’t need change.
Role information: Explain what a WD is. Also omit “…as in you literally can’t. Gotta include everybody. WOK- SHUT THE FUCK UP, anyways.”
Also omit “Click if you dare… (ip grabb-)” it’s unnecessary and breaks the reader’s trust in you. You don’t want people thinking it could actually be an IP grabber. Yes there will be people who will think that, or at the very they would least be disinterested in checking out the link because of it.
That’s about all I have to critique.
Or at the very least*
Personal: omit “least” after “would”
You can tell I edited that IP grabber sentence but didn’t proof it.
All that stuff has been altered or nuked! Thank you for your comment BootlegSnake!
Wanted to keep that tom MacDonald part but then I realized it’s moreso a grudge against “industry plant” “corporate” kinda creators/musicians , but that’s like vauge. But it is a thing I look down upon.
I’ll just throw it up to finding some way to put that frustration in a post someday or something, that was also mostly a joke lol though so
From hacking the station to fixing the station. Epic Bootlegsnake character arc.
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