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    Raid Lockocciferuc-votersubscriberfeatured-lvl1uc-winner-lvl3legendary-nodercrusader 2018-06-22 15:34:30 UTC

    Hey everyone I need criticism! Thanks

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    • You used Ben Ten instead of your own original character

      2018-06-22 15:44:00 UTC 0
      • Replying to: Shemale DisasterYou used Ben Ten instead of your own original character

        That isn’t constructive nor is it criticism.

        2018-06-22 15:51:53 UTC 0
        • Replying to: Raid LockThat isn't constructive nor is it criticism.

          It is criticism, and you didn’t ask for constructive criticism anyway

          2018-06-22 15:55:35 UTC 0
          • Replying to: Shemale DisasterIt is criticism, and you didn’t ask for constructive critici

            you didn’t watch the video and no it’s not criticism. What it is though is a waste of my time.

            2018-06-22 15:57:15 UTC 0
            • Replying to: Raid Lockyou didn’t watch the video and no it’s not criticism. What i

              I mention that your used somebody else’s character because it’s a stupid thing to do unless you ask them permission to use the character, so in the future be creative, and make your own character

              2018-06-22 15:59:41 UTC 0
              • Replying to: Shemale DisasterI mention that your used somebody else’s character because i

                How do you expect me to even get near asking Man of Action if I can use their character and as long as its not monetized its fair use. Also I don’t care about what I’m using. And if your gonna call me stupid then you should go to every DBZ/DBS stick nodes animator and tell them that same exact thing.

                2018-06-22 16:05:26 UTC 0
                • Replying to: Raid LockHow do you expect me to even get near asking Man of Action i

                  I didn’t call you stupid, I called your actions stupid

                  2018-06-22 16:21:27 UTC 0
                  • Replying to: Shemale DisasterI didn’t call you stupid, I called your actions stupid

                    thank you for helping me in my animation skills. Very useful.

                    2018-06-22 16:26:40 UTC 0
                    • Replying to: Raid Lockthank you for helping me in my animation skills. Very useful

                      I didn’t criticize the animation because you didn’t ask me to, if you want me to give criticism on a specific part of the video, then clarify

                      2018-06-22 16:28:08 UTC 0
                      • Replying to: Shemale DisasterI didn’t criticize the animation because you didn’t ask me t

                        Did you watch the whole video?
                        Or look at the top of the post?
                        Or anything really?

                        2018-06-22 17:23:48 UTC 1
                      • Replying to: Shemale DisasterI didn’t criticize the animation because you didn’t ask me t

                        Then be intelligent for once and consider his words and how he presents things

                        2018-06-23 17:30:57 UTC 2
    • biggest takeaway I got was you need to be a little more cinematic

      it comes across as someone set up a camera on a tripod and two dudes fight

      think about action scenes in cartoon/even movies

      getting camera work right is a often overlooked tough part of animation (timing, pacing) etc

      just requires a little planning ahead (“I know I want dude to say this line, and then jump into action off-screen, so I’ll put the camera here” etc…)

      2018-06-22 17:18:12 UTC 2
      • Replying to: Ralph (Developer)biggest takeaway I got was you need to be a little more cine

        Thanks Ralph! Should I do anything special in terms of movement (easing, timing, etc)

        2018-06-22 17:41:40 UTC 0
    • thanks! i’ll make note of that

      2018-06-22 17:40:41 UTC 0