It’s decently well animated, I like the effects. I applaud you on this one, DB. However, I suggest try adding more little details, and fix some things in some scenes. For example, the the white air boy attacking the blue H2O boy, air boy’s arm thing was a bit broken, however, that’s the only one I noticed, so far. Story’s somewhat decent. Pretty nice. 7/10.
Prepare to get attacked by the critics who hate scarfies, by the way.
did very good with some action to start off, then the intro, then some dialogue/plot, then back to action
it’s a simple formula a lot of people miss, and then you’re like 30 seconds into the video about to click away because it’s just textextextextext boring
try to have a little more animation during text tho, you do well enough so it’s not static images, but just a little sway in the body, etc, helps
good syncing with the music too, and humor on point lol
It’s decently well animated, I like the effects. I applaud you on this one, DB. However, I suggest try adding more little details, and fix some things in some scenes. For example, the the white air boy attacking the blue H2O boy, air boy’s arm thing was a bit broken, however, that’s the only one I noticed, so far. Story’s somewhat decent. Pretty nice. 7/10.
Prepare to get attacked by the critics who hate scarfies, by the way.
Thank you for your lil cnc! This will help me to Improve more!
did very good with some action to start off, then the intro, then some dialogue/plot, then back to action
it’s a simple formula a lot of people miss, and then you’re like 30 seconds into the video about to click away because it’s just textextextextext boring
try to have a little more animation during text tho, you do well enough so it’s not static images, but just a little sway in the body, etc, helps
good syncing with the music too, and humor on point lol
overall good stuff, looking forward to more yo