the overall head/hair structure is good, details and well made

but the way the outline of the hair is thick and then thin and then non-existent and then thin again – I think you did it on purpose, judging from the way it fades in/out, it’s aight, I think it’s a style, maybe you like it and it’ll work with the body design, but hard to say rn

its not like its bad but if I had to critique something, that’d be it