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2020-01-31 03:45:09 UTC New character:
Regin(pronounced like Region)KashinMagic Affinity:
BeastAGE:15
O.g Teacher:???
Teacher:ZacharyBio:Regin came to the kingdom of hickory when he was five years old.His family migrated there to get away from the hussle and bussle of the Kingdom of Steele.Unfortunately though,his mother died 2 years later after being attacked by bandits on her way home from the local marketplace.It was at that moment that Regin vowed to become stronger;as a mage in service of the Kingdom of hickery.
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The story’s kinda lame (rip) so how bout’ i give some ideas.
What if he instead:
1) was some average guy who was then granted great power by some artefact, becoming a mage in order to understand his new power
2) a knight of the Kingdom of Steele who fled his kingdom after finding out how corrupt it was. He becomes a mage as to hide his previous identity. His parents are still in Steele, they think their son is dead but Regin is very much alive and he hasn’t forgiven them, hoping to one day free the kingdom if Steele from its tyrants
Thanks but,The kingdom of steele is Kinda modern;they dont have knights more of a military armed with guns(made from magic items).This Kingdom is still very important to the story though and has something to do with our MC’s past
@epitaph200 Also the first Idea is kinda already a thing at least I planned for Regin to wield some sort of ancient weapon,a cosmic weapon that probably belonged to one of the Cosmic knights
User Banned
Well, apply my ideas to that setting and the same sorta thing goes
(This links in to Epitaph’s point about it being a lame story)
It doesn’t really matter what idea or what direction you decide to go with the series as long as you portray it well and keep it new and interesting.
Also an average guy who receives an artefact is equally a very cliche and not great story so I disagree with that one.