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    Marshmallow 2020-07-23 15:48:23 UTC

    What should I improve on this

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    • • The shooting stick figure is holding the top of the gun

      • Personally, I think the recoil should pop backwards a bit faster and more fierce

      • The bottom stick should bend back a bit more when being shot, after all, he’s being shot by a speeding bullet at close range and not to mention in animation things should be over exaggerated to express certain things easier

      • OPTIONAL: Maybe make the red screen longer, or no red screen for the first shot and make it for the second shot but in slow mo???

      Other than those it looks good in my opinion!

      2020-07-23 15:59:12 UTC 5
      • Replying to: SmileGuy• The shooting stick figure is holding the top of the gun •

        Thank you for the tips

        2020-07-23 16:01:24 UTC 0
      • Replying to: SmileGuy• The shooting stick figure is holding the top of the gun •

        was not expecting such detailed criticism on…this, of all animations, but lol

        2020-07-23 16:14:27 UTC 1
        • Replying to: Ralph (Developer)was not expecting such detailed criticism on...this, of all

          im bored and have nothing to do but important work I don’t feel like doing.

          2020-07-23 16:19:52 UTC 1